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10/23/2015 c1 debslmac
10/19/2012 c1 kiwisrock
AMAZING! Wow! Thanks!
7/9/2012 c1 Guest
And alliterative as well, that was interesting fun, rachel
6/30/2012 c1 msmargo
yes, awesome is the word.
12/29/2011 c1 GoneFeb2021
6/30/2011 c1 maria2906
O.o oh wow! You just described the entire process of Bella's changing into a vampire in 100 poetic words! This is..I've never seen anything like this and it's even more special since you wrote it for Sarah,who is simply wonderful and her own words are poems too!
4/23/2011 c1 J.DRAST
Hello. SARAH is very unique. You are a master of words! Thanks, Suzan Noerr
3/25/2011 c1 4Kats Flower Girls
Very creative idea for a drabble/poem! It must have been hard to stay with just one letter starting each word & yet move the story along...

Now let me see if I understand the just of it... So, Edward & Bella are making love and Edward just snaps and then hurts Bella and has to change her to heal her wounds...
2/5/2011 c1 DeleteThisPlease9999
Awesome alliteration, brilliant Betti.
12/7/2010 c1 8GothicTemptress
I saw "red" and thought "oh shit!" The last word exclaimed, demanding and pleading...just...*wildly applauds you...THIS!*
10/18/2010 c1 16Erikasbuddy
DUDE! THAT! was most awesome!
7/19/2010 c1 6onePushyFox
Oh, Betti! I so enjoyed this! I've never seen Twi-poetry before. Very cool!
7/18/2010 c1 2SandytheSandstorm
My My My that was Hottttt.

7/18/2010 c1 1dihenydd
This is so very clever. Things like this often seem so contrived but I had read more than halfway through before I realised what was happening! Loved it.

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