
4/5/2017 c18 Guest
Awesome story!
Awesome story!
7/19/2016 c18 punky warhammer
sorry i'm late to the party, but this is awesome!
sorry i'm late to the party, but this is awesome!
5/9/2012 c18 unseendoughnut
This was an astonishing avatar fanfict-certainly one of the best! I would encourage you to write an epilogue but you must be exhausted from all the hard effort you put into your writing. I thank you for allowing me the pleasure in life of reading your work. :)
This was an astonishing avatar fanfict-certainly one of the best! I would encourage you to write an epilogue but you must be exhausted from all the hard effort you put into your writing. I thank you for allowing me the pleasure in life of reading your work. :)
12/4/2011 c13
1Vengeful Astartes
mad chap m8, things are starting to pick up ay. keep up the good work

mad chap m8, things are starting to pick up ay. keep up the good work
12/4/2011 c9 Vengeful Astartes
nice little lemon there m8, like the ebb and flow of the story. keep going
nice little lemon there m8, like the ebb and flow of the story. keep going
1/11/2011 c15
11Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbit
gha...such a good chapter, I really like it...You must update,and it was worth the wiat, but I cant wait for the update, and its ok

gha...such a good chapter, I really like it...You must update,and it was worth the wiat, but I cant wait for the update, and its ok
12/8/2010 c12
2wolves-rain-chick
I absolutely love this story. I read the first one:) this story captured my attention after the first few sentences. Avatar is such a great movie and you made it very accurate.
Thank you so much for writing a great story.
-Wolvie

I absolutely love this story. I read the first one:) this story captured my attention after the first few sentences. Avatar is such a great movie and you made it very accurate.
Thank you so much for writing a great story.
-Wolvie
9/1/2010 c11
1Avyrian
Another great chapter! Excellent resolution to the relationship issue... Though even with Grace's promise to Jake, I'm still worried about the impending war! Please update soon. I love seeing updates to this story!
Great work and Irayo nimun!
~Tsyal'Makto

Another great chapter! Excellent resolution to the relationship issue... Though even with Grace's promise to Jake, I'm still worried about the impending war! Please update soon. I love seeing updates to this story!
Great work and Irayo nimun!
~Tsyal'Makto
8/30/2010 c10 Avyrian
...uh oh... Jake seems to have the worst timing for his mistakes. I can only imagine what will happen when he tells her about the humans... O_o I hope things work out in the end. I hate to see Grace and Jake at odds with one another. Please Update Soon!
Thanks Again and keep up the excellent work!
Irayo!
~Tsyal Makto
...uh oh... Jake seems to have the worst timing for his mistakes. I can only imagine what will happen when he tells her about the humans... O_o I hope things work out in the end. I hate to see Grace and Jake at odds with one another. Please Update Soon!
Thanks Again and keep up the excellent work!
Irayo!
~Tsyal Makto