for Pandora: Another Time8/30/2010 c10 
1Avyrian
...uh oh... Jake seems to have the worst timing for his mistakes. I can only imagine what will happen when he tells her about the humans... O_o I hope things work out in the end. I hate to see Grace and Jake at odds with one another. Please Update Soon!
Thanks Again and keep up the excellent work!
Irayo!
~Tsyal Makto
1Avyrian...uh oh... Jake seems to have the worst timing for his mistakes. I can only imagine what will happen when he tells her about the humans... O_o I hope things work out in the end. I hate to see Grace and Jake at odds with one another. Please Update Soon!
Thanks Again and keep up the excellent work!
Irayo!
~Tsyal Makto
8/26/2010 c9 L.D
awsome chapter! The jake and Fko'itan interaction was so cute XD so keep it up
awsome chapter! The jake and Fko'itan interaction was so cute XD so keep it up
8/25/2010 c9 prettytightkid
"Did i hurt you?" haha I laughed so hard. Good chapter, can't wait for more
"Did i hurt you?" haha I laughed so hard. Good chapter, can't wait for more
8/25/2010 c9 Avyrian
Great job and keep up the great work! I love seeing updates to this story!
Good progression... Though it looks like Ngay'swizav's worries may be a closer to home than I originally thought... and I can only imagine the future conflict if Jay'la show back up... Well that and when the humans arrive I'm sure things will become much worse than a little rivalry over mates!
Great work and Irayo nimun!
~Tsyal Makto
Great job and keep up the great work! I love seeing updates to this story!
Good progression... Though it looks like Ngay'swizav's worries may be a closer to home than I originally thought... and I can only imagine the future conflict if Jay'la show back up... Well that and when the humans arrive I'm sure things will become much worse than a little rivalry over mates!
Great work and Irayo nimun!
~Tsyal Makto
8/20/2010 c7 Avyrian
Great story so far! I really like the concept behind the storyline and am looking forward to seeing how it develops.
Irayo!
~Tsyal'Makto
Great story so far! I really like the concept behind the storyline and am looking forward to seeing how it develops.
Irayo!
~Tsyal'Makto
8/20/2010 c7 L.D
great stuff maybe some jake and Anna Quaritch friendship stuff to get the na'vi more excepting to jake but apart from that keep it up :D
great stuff maybe some jake and Anna Quaritch friendship stuff to get the na'vi more excepting to jake but apart from that keep it up :D
8/18/2010 c6 L.D
loving this so far keep it up :D
loving this so far keep it up :D
8/16/2010 c5 L.D
loving this so keep more coming lol
no doesn't feel rushed at the moment as their connection is just attraction right now
ps sorry for the 2 updates has technical problems
loving this so keep more coming lol
no doesn't feel rushed at the moment as their connection is just attraction right now
ps sorry for the 2 updates has technical problems
8/16/2010 c5 11Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbit
bla know it doesnt seemed rushed at al it was good and Icatn wait for more of it,hope its soon ^^ love this story
11Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbitbla know it doesnt seemed rushed at al it was good and Icatn wait for more of it,hope its soon ^^ love this story
8/10/2010 c4 L.D
awsome chapter keep it up :D
awsome chapter keep it up :D
8/10/2010 c4 L.D
awsome chapter keep it up :D
awsome chapter keep it up :D
8/10/2010 c4 Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbit
lvoe it and cant wait,adn its cool how her mother was a human
lvoe it and cant wait,adn its cool how her mother was a human
8/10/2010 c3 Bilbo Baggins Is My Hobbit
OH I really like this chapter and I cant wait for the next chapter/update I really hope its soon,and I loved the part where Grace smacked jake in the face with her tail.lol it was funny XD
OH I really like this chapter and I cant wait for the next chapter/update I really hope its soon,and I loved the part where Grace smacked jake in the face with her tail.lol it was funny XD