for Beneath the Surface7/27/2014 c5 
11FooFaFie
it's been what a YEAR?! after a chapter like this you better not be making me wait a whole other year to post again (do you know how frustrating that kind of thing is?) I mean really she gets to Konoha this better not be where you leave all of us to wait another year!
so seriously PLEASE update soooooon!
11FooFaFieit's been what a YEAR?! after a chapter like this you better not be making me wait a whole other year to post again (do you know how frustrating that kind of thing is?) I mean really she gets to Konoha this better not be where you leave all of us to wait another year!
so seriously PLEASE update soooooon!
7/27/2014 c5 Lauramichca
Great story so far! I've been looking forward to reading this chapter :)
But what happened to the tsukino boy/ninja? I had thought they might bring him back too, if for no other reason then information and that he was injured (but possibly even to convert).
Thanks for sharing!
Great story so far! I've been looking forward to reading this chapter :)
But what happened to the tsukino boy/ninja? I had thought they might bring him back too, if for no other reason then information and that he was injured (but possibly even to convert).
Thanks for sharing!
7/27/2014 c5 4cowgirlkitten2000
great chapter. i cant wait to see what will happen once she is there. thank you for the update. this is going great like always.
4cowgirlkitten2000great chapter. i cant wait to see what will happen once she is there. thank you for the update. this is going great like always.
7/27/2014 c5 alice
vivement la suite
vivement la suite
7/27/2014 c5 5Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami
Please don'thave her tell her story to anyone. Not even the hokage. She odesn't need to and I really dislike reading her telling her story to strangers so easily. They brought her hear for her help in the medical areas. If they want her help then they will respect her privacy or she will leave. They need her more than she needs them. Sakura did see her priestess robes. So she can say that she is a priestess and has had medical herb and archery training and possibly a little power. If they ask her about how she sealed her house she replies that they asked her here for medical knowledge and she isn't going to give away all of her secrets as she is sure they aren't going to give theirs. She hasn't agreed to be a part of the village. Only assist it. She is not a citizen and doesn't have any reason to trust them except for Naruto and maybe his team. Sakura wants to examine her and they might try to make her a lab rat. Naruto said she could stay with him already so i hope she stays in hihs apartment with him and cleans it up. But since they don't trust her they might have her stay with a more seasoned shinobi or give her her own small apartment and have someone watch and tail her. This is a very good story and I lime it a lot. Please update again soon.
5Natsumi Tsuchi-OokamiPlease don'thave her tell her story to anyone. Not even the hokage. She odesn't need to and I really dislike reading her telling her story to strangers so easily. They brought her hear for her help in the medical areas. If they want her help then they will respect her privacy or she will leave. They need her more than she needs them. Sakura did see her priestess robes. So she can say that she is a priestess and has had medical herb and archery training and possibly a little power. If they ask her about how she sealed her house she replies that they asked her here for medical knowledge and she isn't going to give away all of her secrets as she is sure they aren't going to give theirs. She hasn't agreed to be a part of the village. Only assist it. She is not a citizen and doesn't have any reason to trust them except for Naruto and maybe his team. Sakura wants to examine her and they might try to make her a lab rat. Naruto said she could stay with him already so i hope she stays in hihs apartment with him and cleans it up. But since they don't trust her they might have her stay with a more seasoned shinobi or give her her own small apartment and have someone watch and tail her. This is a very good story and I lime it a lot. Please update again soon.
7/27/2014 c5 silvertree
OMG! An update! I am so glad you didn't drop this. Love the chapter and hope you update really soon!
OMG! An update! I am so glad you didn't drop this. Love the chapter and hope you update really soon!
4/15/2014 c4 1dragonic raptor
this story is really good. i wonder y it hasnt been continued for so long. in either case i hope u will b able to do so in the future fore these chapters have captured me in rapt attention with how they just seem to pull one into the story. i look forward to many more well written imaginings that will hopefully show themselves in the times to come. :D
Ja ne
1dragonic raptorthis story is really good. i wonder y it hasnt been continued for so long. in either case i hope u will b able to do so in the future fore these chapters have captured me in rapt attention with how they just seem to pull one into the story. i look forward to many more well written imaginings that will hopefully show themselves in the times to come. :D
Ja ne
2/23/2014 c4 7c3lph t1tl3d
Hello I just wanted to say that I love this story and that I hope that you will find the time to come back to it. I too think that there are not enough Kakashi/Kagome stories out there and I can honestly say that this one is great. Thank you for taking the time to post.
7c3lph t1tl3dHello I just wanted to say that I love this story and that I hope that you will find the time to come back to it. I too think that there are not enough Kakashi/Kagome stories out there and I can honestly say that this one is great. Thank you for taking the time to post.
11/17/2013 c4 tinawinna
I teared up a little at the end there, I could feel Kagomes hurt. :(
I really like this story so far, I look forward to the next update. :D
I teared up a little at the end there, I could feel Kagomes hurt. :(
I really like this story so far, I look forward to the next update. :D
8/17/2013 c4 Your Fan
Please update! It's been half a year! This story is to good to leave it unfinished
Please update! It's been half a year! This story is to good to leave it unfinished