for Beneath the Surface4/1/2013 c4 
4Inu Demoness of Darkness
This is amazing. I really hope you update soon. I love that you aren't making Kakashi some sex-driven crazy person, because he isn't. So many stories portray him as such and it's nice to finally read a story where the characters are 'normal'. )
4Inu Demoness of DarknessThis is amazing. I really hope you update soon. I love that you aren't making Kakashi some sex-driven crazy person, because he isn't. So many stories portray him as such and it's nice to finally read a story where the characters are 'normal'. )
2/26/2013 c4 GiggleboxGirlie
Holy craziness this is ridiculously good! Please come back and update.
Xoxo. Gigglebox Girlie
Holy craziness this is ridiculously good! Please come back and update.
Xoxo. Gigglebox Girlie
12/9/2012 c4 2bookgirl813
This story has such incredible potential. I realize you have a full schedule and many RL demands (I'm right there with you) and probably find that this is a therapeutic release.
A suggestion to better this? See if you can find a beta. There are quite a few mistakes - miss-spelled words, missing words and crazy sentences that don't completely detract from this story, but make it difficult at times to read.
Otherwise, I love your idea and curious to watch the relationships grow.
2bookgirl813This story has such incredible potential. I realize you have a full schedule and many RL demands (I'm right there with you) and probably find that this is a therapeutic release.
A suggestion to better this? See if you can find a beta. There are quite a few mistakes - miss-spelled words, missing words and crazy sentences that don't completely detract from this story, but make it difficult at times to read.
Otherwise, I love your idea and curious to watch the relationships grow.
12/9/2012 c1 Lay-zzz
hey Hey HEy HEY! YOU'RE SERIOUSLY STOPPING THERE! COOOOMMMMEEE OOOOOOOOOON IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON I'll... do... something... you won't like... JUST UPDATE SOON KAY!
hey Hey HEy HEY! YOU'RE SERIOUSLY STOPPING THERE! COOOOMMMMEEE OOOOOOOOOON IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON I'll... do... something... you won't like... JUST UPDATE SOON KAY!
12/9/2012 c4 11Wicken25
Ohh update again soon this seems like a really good story I can't wait to read more.
11Wicken25Ohh update again soon this seems like a really good story I can't wait to read more.
12/1/2012 c4 fredisagirl
Thank you for updating. I reallly like this story. Will Shippo find Kagome or any of the others? Looking forward to reading more.
Thank you for updating. I reallly like this story. Will Shippo find Kagome or any of the others? Looking forward to reading more.
11/30/2012 c4 demongirl2003
Can't wait to see how you're going to develop the characters! Please update soon!
Can't wait to see how you're going to develop the characters! Please update soon!
11/29/2012 c4 YAY
Update soon please. This story is amazing. :D
Update soon please. This story is amazing. :D
11/29/2012 c3 THIS IS AMAZING
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON. Kakashi/Kagome stories, espicially ones this good, are so hard to find. QAQ
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON. Kakashi/Kagome stories, espicially ones this good, are so hard to find. QAQ