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5/21/2017 c4 RAVENS
This story is so well written. You have such a mastery over the characters. Its truly a tragedy you didn't finish this story. MY god its so perfectly written. Erotic yet entrancing. I really wish you would continue this amazing tale.
4/25/2017 c4 Shantey Gonzalez
That was mean and scary,but will Coraline escape from the beldam and what happened to the other father?
4/10/2017 c4 Dildo man
Needs dildos
3/19/2017 c4 13Kemetri D. Sire
I loved every last one of these chapters you written. They were beautiful, funny, suggestive, cute, maternal and a real captivating joy to read. I'm so glad that you made this spanking fanfic.

Good job, this is a amazing chapter.
1/28/2017 c3 Guest
This story is beautiful. I hope you write more like it.
10/23/2016 c4 Guest
This is disgusting. You basicall wrote childpornography and executed it like a bad porno.

If you ignore that, you didn't capture Coralines personality at all. Coraline is smarter than this and definitely don't swear this much.
If she would have sweared that much we would have seen it in the movie or the book.

Instead of using a really unfit charachter to gratify your own fetish, maybe you should use a charachter of properation age! And actually capturing the charachter is a plus too.

1/10
8/11/2016 c1 Guest
Coraline: Hell no.
Other mother: SMACK
3/30/2016 c4 pinkb33sT
damn this is good would like to see this continue
3/20/2016 c4 Guest
Great story!
3/17/2016 c4 Jordanna D
Did something like this happen to you as a child?
8/29/2015 c1 viciousmalacite
this is a bit disturbing since she is 11 when this happens.i recommend u make the first 4 chapters a dream and that she got away but her parents have her committed 2 an asylum till shes 21 becuz of her claims of the other have them be super religious so they wont allow her any pleasure nor will they teach her anything about her body or sex or anything and eventually that type of abuse causes gastric problems which leads 2 them force feeding her laxatives till they stop working 3 months after 18th birthday forcing them 2 use enemas but also making her believe her real parents DONT love her so even when she gets out she hates them causing a fracture in their relationship and causing coraline 2 miss the other mother.1 month after shes back home her parents are killed in a bank robbery so she makes a deal with the other mother that if she never mentions the buttons again in ANYWAY she'll return which u can do w/e u want.
3/31/2015 c1 1DARKNESS4311
Good story keep it going
1/1/2015 c3 Raven Huu
OMG! This made me flush! Good one ol' Slyo
6/16/2013 c1 Cheesed off read
You suck too. Wow, what a rude reviewer you are. Guess what?! You suck too. And the plot? Don't get me started.

Be a nice human and others will be nice to you. Be a sh*tty human, and you will reap what you sow.
1/27/2013 c4 Guest
cool fanfic! :3
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