for B's Revenge8/29/2010 c2 
4Red Priest
It's alright but I think you make it too obvious that it is two separate people writing. Instead of beginning 98% of paragraphs with "BB" then "Shiko" then "BB" try and give a little more variety.
4Red PriestIt's alright but I think you make it too obvious that it is two separate people writing. Instead of beginning 98% of paragraphs with "BB" then "Shiko" then "BB" try and give a little more variety.
8/21/2010 c6 64Atreyl
A LONG CHAPTER! Yay! X3
My favorite part was the one where BB got hyper and hit Shiko with the frying pan. Bad BB. *hits with a random man purse*
I really liked, too, that B predicted the songs they wanted to hear...I wanna do that! D:
I loved this chapter, it's my favorite, and not just because of it's length. As always, you two have proved yourselves to be fantastic.
Looking forward to more,
F
64AtreylA LONG CHAPTER! Yay! X3
My favorite part was the one where BB got hyper and hit Shiko with the frying pan. Bad BB. *hits with a random man purse*
I really liked, too, that B predicted the songs they wanted to hear...I wanna do that! D:
I loved this chapter, it's my favorite, and not just because of it's length. As always, you two have proved yourselves to be fantastic.
Looking forward to more,
F
8/21/2010 c6 3hear-of-the-Hater
khakha! luz it! it toke me about 40m 2 read it on my nintendo DSi...
very good, UPDATE! ^_^
3hear-of-the-Haterkhakha! luz it! it toke me about 40m 2 read it on my nintendo DSi...
very good, UPDATE! ^_^
8/20/2010 c5 64Atreyl
Wait...what does it mean? I'm befuddled!
Moving on to story-wise things, another update! You left a cliffhanger there, that's mean. D:
Also, on a random note, there was an ad on the bottom of the page asking if you have problems sleeping. o.o
64AtreylWait...what does it mean? I'm befuddled!
Moving on to story-wise things, another update! You left a cliffhanger there, that's mean. D:
Also, on a random note, there was an ad on the bottom of the page asking if you have problems sleeping. o.o
8/18/2010 c5 19fluffymareep
This is a good story.
I cannot wait until the next chapter!
~Escaping Dreams
19fluffymareepThis is a good story.
I cannot wait until the next chapter!
~Escaping Dreams
8/17/2010 c4 64Atreyl
XD Love the baby sister part. Hilarious, and another great chapter! You two are awesome writers. :D
Sorry this review is so late, I was busy packing for Atlantic City. Write more soon!
From,
F
PostScript: I love Beyond Bunny. :3
64AtreylXD Love the baby sister part. Hilarious, and another great chapter! You two are awesome writers. :D
Sorry this review is so late, I was busy packing for Atlantic City. Write more soon!
From,
F
PostScript: I love Beyond Bunny. :3
8/12/2010 c1 L Ryuuzaki
BB~kun, I just finished reading the first chapter of 'B's Revenge' ~ I must say, I'm truly looking forward to continue reading the following chapters! I know I am a bit late in reading you latest works, especially this collaboration writing you're doing with Shiko ~ I wish you both only the best and may you continue to write together (^_^)
BB~kun, I just finished reading the first chapter of 'B's Revenge' ~ I must say, I'm truly looking forward to continue reading the following chapters! I know I am a bit late in reading you latest works, especially this collaboration writing you're doing with Shiko ~ I wish you both only the best and may you continue to write together (^_^)
8/6/2010 c3 Atreyl
Oh, I loved the part where they called the boss. XD
And yes, you're updating really fast, which makes me happy! Keep writing you two, can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, I loved the part where they called the boss. XD
And yes, you're updating really fast, which makes me happy! Keep writing you two, can't wait for the next chapter!
7/22/2010 c1 Atreyl
Oh, my...the SUSPENSE! Write, you two, write!(Whoops, I almost misspelled 'write' there. ^^')
Oh, my...the SUSPENSE! Write, you two, write!(Whoops, I almost misspelled 'write' there. ^^')