for Alternatives8/16/2010 c3 
37Fred-Weasley-Isn't-Dead
So, I decided to return the favor and read your story and awwwwwwwwwwwww. Its so cute. And action-y (is that a word) and I getb that Bella was mostly friends with Edward and Alice, but I love intereactions between Jasper and Emmett and Bella. Like, have Bella become totally pissed off, like, have her hear what Edward was thinking about her and Demetri and make her go meet up with him but she's still going to be upset and mean and Jasper is going to be there with Emmett so she's outnumbered. Sorry, I just totally love Jasper and Emmett be big brothers =3
37Fred-Weasley-Isn't-DeadSo, I decided to return the favor and read your story and awwwwwwwwwwwww. Its so cute. And action-y (is that a word) and I getb that Bella was mostly friends with Edward and Alice, but I love intereactions between Jasper and Emmett and Bella. Like, have Bella become totally pissed off, like, have her hear what Edward was thinking about her and Demetri and make her go meet up with him but she's still going to be upset and mean and Jasper is going to be there with Emmett so she's outnumbered. Sorry, I just totally love Jasper and Emmett be big brothers =3
8/10/2010 c3 12Dallas Angel
y wuld u do that y plz plz dont make bella emo plz plz update soon plz plz listen thanks
ps vampires cant b emo
12Dallas Angely wuld u do that y plz plz dont make bella emo plz plz update soon plz plz listen thanks
ps vampires cant b emo
8/8/2010 c3 2mskenzieclearwater
DGHEFIOAHERIUO!
WHAAAT?
That was awesome. You better write faster. or I shall get Bella and Demetri after YOU.
Erm... you could always have bella pretend like she died with the cliff diving. Or... I mean, Jake loves her so much... have him help her with it?
Ooh, and you should bring Jake back! Haaa! Him and Demetri could both go and bash on Edward!
2mskenzieclearwaterDGHEFIOAHERIUO!
WHAAAT?
That was awesome. You better write faster. or I shall get Bella and Demetri after YOU.
Erm... you could always have bella pretend like she died with the cliff diving. Or... I mean, Jake loves her so much... have him help her with it?
Ooh, and you should bring Jake back! Haaa! Him and Demetri could both go and bash on Edward!
8/8/2010 c3 59Daerwyn
AHHHH! UPdate! I'm screaming at the top of my lungs as I try to rein in my characters. They seem to just lash out at all the wrong moments. . . ugh, oh well. Anyway, I love thsi story! Keep it up!
59DaerwynAHHHH! UPdate! I'm screaming at the top of my lungs as I try to rein in my characters. They seem to just lash out at all the wrong moments. . . ugh, oh well. Anyway, I love thsi story! Keep it up!
8/8/2010 c3 Miss joc
PLZ LET BELLA CHOOSE DEMETRI OVER EDWARD PLZ CUZ THA MESS UP WAT HE DID IN THE PAST PLUS HE TOLD HER 2 MOVE ON IN HER LIFE WIT OUT HIM IN IT PLZ WRITE MORE PLZ!
PLZ LET BELLA CHOOSE DEMETRI OVER EDWARD PLZ CUZ THA MESS UP WAT HE DID IN THE PAST PLUS HE TOLD HER 2 MOVE ON IN HER LIFE WIT OUT HIM IN IT PLZ WRITE MORE PLZ!
7/22/2010 c2 city bookworm
I acually like your Bella. She while being fairly broken still is a force to be reconed with. I loved it when she punched Edward. I see that she likes Dimitri and seems to like her life as a Volturi.But I think she will be happyer as a Cullen. I don't know where your story is going really. I kind of like that. I really like the darker Bella though,I hope you keep that edge to her.I look forward to reading more of your story.
I acually like your Bella. She while being fairly broken still is a force to be reconed with. I loved it when she punched Edward. I see that she likes Dimitri and seems to like her life as a Volturi.But I think she will be happyer as a Cullen. I don't know where your story is going really. I kind of like that. I really like the darker Bella though,I hope you keep that edge to her.I look forward to reading more of your story.
7/22/2010 c2 2mskenzieclearwater
Awesomescauce!
No, where's my rainbow and leprechaun with my pot of gold?
But I loveeed the flash back! WRITEEE FASTERRR.
2mskenzieclearwaterAwesomescauce!
No, where's my rainbow and leprechaun with my pot of gold?
But I loveeed the flash back! WRITEEE FASTERRR.
7/21/2010 c1 VAtwilightmumma
it was awesome i cant wait for the next chapter!
it was awesome i cant wait for the next chapter!
7/21/2010 c1 littlenerd
im interested, it seems well written...hate edward,looooooooooove bella/demetri ;).keep writing!
im interested, it seems well written...hate edward,looooooooooove bella/demetri ;).keep writing!