for Another Word for Rival12/12/2012 c1 
1X Miyuki-chan X
If you read lover and rival backwards it's like this: revol and lavir. If you change the tense on the vowels it's really close to being both words, do you see it?
Thanks for the story it's so cute!
1X Miyuki-chan XIf you read lover and rival backwards it's like this: revol and lavir. If you change the tense on the vowels it's really close to being both words, do you see it?
Thanks for the story it's so cute!
1/11/2011 c1 NJKHBJGVSBDFHKJFG
I really liked the concept between the whole "rival and lover are similar" thing. It really impressed me. And probably would have impressed me more if I wasn't half asleep. XD
As a whole, the fic was really good. ^^
I really liked the concept between the whole "rival and lover are similar" thing. It really impressed me. And probably would have impressed me more if I wasn't half asleep. XD
As a whole, the fic was really good. ^^
9/30/2010 c1 47GrnEydDvl
This was a really great story. It was funny and cute and creative. I loved the line, "Don't you have footsteps?" That made me laugh out loud. It's so Touya because he always appears out of nowhere. Really well done!
47GrnEydDvlThis was a really great story. It was funny and cute and creative. I loved the line, "Don't you have footsteps?" That made me laugh out loud. It's so Touya because he always appears out of nowhere. Really well done!
7/22/2010 c1 1princesskisara
Hmm... I think that describe hikaru feelling and perhaps akira... Hope its true and accept it. But its still the beginning and hey, i like it... I think. So please update soon... So i can read the next chapter.
1princesskisaraHmm... I think that describe hikaru feelling and perhaps akira... Hope its true and accept it. But its still the beginning and hey, i like it... I think. So please update soon... So i can read the next chapter.
7/22/2010 c1 2Aracil
HikaruxAkira huh?
Well, it is my second favorite pairing in HnG I must admit (the first is HikaruxSai regardless of ghosty issues, because the only thing that Sai can touch and influence is Hikaru anyway) Sooo, I never thought about the similarities of rival and lover, but I can say that it is really appropiate. Good job!
2AracilHikaruxAkira huh?
Well, it is my second favorite pairing in HnG I must admit (the first is HikaruxSai regardless of ghosty issues, because the only thing that Sai can touch and influence is Hikaru anyway) Sooo, I never thought about the similarities of rival and lover, but I can say that it is really appropiate. Good job!