for Pacific Half7/31/2010 c2 TheRealWorldHurts
Awesome...but don't ya think you should updated more?
Just an opinion! I didn't mean to criticize!
Awesome...but don't ya think you should updated more?
Just an opinion! I didn't mean to criticize!
7/22/2010 c1 
30flawedesires
I feel the same way about reviews; I only have like, 9 for my first fanfic...=_( Anyway, doing a great job! I can tell this is going to be one of the rare ones!
Kisses! -Alice
30flawedesiresI feel the same way about reviews; I only have like, 9 for my first fanfic...=_( Anyway, doing a great job! I can tell this is going to be one of the rare ones!
Kisses! -Alice
7/22/2010 c1 5willful dest
Holy shit! I just found the worst fic of the century! And here I was thinking that it couldn't get any worse in this fandom. *shakes head*
Dude, Annabeth is not stupid enough to do that and you fail to say how a school would accept a girl when it is a boy's school. Also, you do not have enough detail. Black hair with blonde bangs? What the hell? Ugh. *headdesk* Just awful. It seems like you were trying to do a "She's The Man" spin-off but with Annabeth. This is terrible.
Hon, this idea is crap and I would recommend that you delete this fic immediately.
Thanks,
Willful Destruction
-Also, you have a ton of grammar/spelling mistakes in your summary.-
5willful destHoly shit! I just found the worst fic of the century! And here I was thinking that it couldn't get any worse in this fandom. *shakes head*
Dude, Annabeth is not stupid enough to do that and you fail to say how a school would accept a girl when it is a boy's school. Also, you do not have enough detail. Black hair with blonde bangs? What the hell? Ugh. *headdesk* Just awful. It seems like you were trying to do a "She's The Man" spin-off but with Annabeth. This is terrible.
Hon, this idea is crap and I would recommend that you delete this fic immediately.
Thanks,
Willful Destruction
-Also, you have a ton of grammar/spelling mistakes in your summary.-