for Brighter Than the Sun6/18/2013 c1 SexyCoen
You really know how to make Claire and Steve sound like the real Claire and Steve. Amazing job! (:
You really know how to make Claire and Steve sound like the real Claire and Steve. Amazing job! (:
2/4/2013 c2 
16Sheenah267
Commenting again on this short, I love it so much! A little part of me would love to know -in details- what they were doing exactly before that scene...but I won't push you too much XD (I think you were also working on some lemon about these two). Lovely work, keep the Claire/Steve love real!
16Sheenah267Commenting again on this short, I love it so much! A little part of me would love to know -in details- what they were doing exactly before that scene...but I won't push you too much XD (I think you were also working on some lemon about these two). Lovely work, keep the Claire/Steve love real!
1/15/2013 c1 98Yamiga
Thanks for writing a story for once that's not about Leon and Claire, but Steve and Claire! I believe those two should only be paired with each other. You're story is amazing!
98YamigaThanks for writing a story for once that's not about Leon and Claire, but Steve and Claire! I believe those two should only be paired with each other. You're story is amazing!
7/28/2010 c1 9Metalmark
Wow - you have an amazing ability with words! The descriptions and emotions flow nicely.
Claire's "burn" to Steve was, yeah, ouch. Of course, she was teasing (I think?) but still. I'm sure Steve felt pretty much like an idiot but she kissed him so, forgive and forget?
And their playful teasing at the end for the win. Claire always has to get in the last word ne? Typical Claire.
A fun read - definitely enjoyed reading it. Nicely done!
-B.M.
9MetalmarkWow - you have an amazing ability with words! The descriptions and emotions flow nicely.
Claire's "burn" to Steve was, yeah, ouch. Of course, she was teasing (I think?) but still. I'm sure Steve felt pretty much like an idiot but she kissed him so, forgive and forget?
And their playful teasing at the end for the win. Claire always has to get in the last word ne? Typical Claire.
A fun read - definitely enjoyed reading it. Nicely done!
-B.M.
7/24/2010 c1 16Sheenah267
Hehehee I loved every word of it XD You did a really good job, I could actually see that happening ;) and no, they're not too out of character :)
and thanks for writing it for my project ^^ I love it !
16Sheenah267Hehehee I loved every word of it XD You did a really good job, I could actually see that happening ;) and no, they're not too out of character :)
and thanks for writing it for my project ^^ I love it !