for The Beginning of Bad Fanfiction7/26/2013 c1 
3Jacobluver321
{First story whoo! I wrote this at 3:59 am. Thank you Pencil and Ave and Lola for helping me out with this. :)}
lol, pencil...
3Jacobluver321{First story whoo! I wrote this at 3:59 am. Thank you Pencil and Ave and Lola for helping me out with this. :)}
lol, pencil...
1/9/2011 c1 6moscovitz
XD I love it. Really good concept, and hillarious. But maybe her name should /not/ be fanfiction?
TELL ME HOW TO PLAY QWOP.
6moscovitzXD I love it. Really good concept, and hillarious. But maybe her name should /not/ be fanfiction?
TELL ME HOW TO PLAY QWOP.
8/20/2010 c1 2YearOfDreams
Interesting... very interesting...
I didn't really find any mistakes. Of course it's 3am and I'm not at my sharpest, but still. Good job. I like the concept... at first I was confused, but then I understood and think this whole fic is quite clever. I also like they way you eased into the general idea of the oneshot, starting with an introduction thingy about being a muse.
YearOfDreams_
2YearOfDreamsInteresting... very interesting...
I didn't really find any mistakes. Of course it's 3am and I'm not at my sharpest, but still. Good job. I like the concept... at first I was confused, but then I understood and think this whole fic is quite clever. I also like they way you eased into the general idea of the oneshot, starting with an introduction thingy about being a muse.
YearOfDreams_
8/16/2010 c1 10The Midnight Doe
I like this a lot, Critic. You're a really good writer. This idea is really creative, too. I saw a few mistakes, but other than that, the grammer was good. Good job :)
~Tay(:
10The Midnight DoeI like this a lot, Critic. You're a really good writer. This idea is really creative, too. I saw a few mistakes, but other than that, the grammer was good. Good job :)
~Tay(:
8/10/2010 c1 2algebraic.wonton
Hmmm... interesting. This reminds me of a General's speech to his army to prep for battle.
2algebraic.wontonHmmm... interesting. This reminds me of a General's speech to his army to prep for battle.
8/10/2010 c1 55kandisi
Interesting, though I gather every fanfic author who has been around for a while has a few fics they're not especially proud of, lol.
55kandisiInteresting, though I gather every fanfic author who has been around for a while has a few fics they're not especially proud of, lol.
8/2/2010 c1 blaviken
The muse of FFs. :)
Yes, I agree, bad FFs are much more easier to write than good FFs. I think it is the positive reviews you get that pull you in and encourage you to write more crapfics.
It's a nice allegory to the state of this miserable site. Updates would be possible if the ending was tweaked a bit.
The muse of FFs. :)
Yes, I agree, bad FFs are much more easier to write than good FFs. I think it is the positive reviews you get that pull you in and encourage you to write more crapfics.
It's a nice allegory to the state of this miserable site. Updates would be possible if the ending was tweaked a bit.
7/27/2010 c1 Deleted84493
Now that I'm not constantly in capitals I can start to review this without hurting your eyes :) I hate all caps. It just looks Noob-ish. It hurts my head to read it.
I don't think it would be at ALL easy to be a muse, because people just hate you all of the time. Constantly about having too much muse, or not enough, it's just a thankless job!
-As you will have quickly realized my review style is spodratic and ramblish. And Long.
I like this story, It almost reminds me of Storm's series, but it's been pulled off in a unique way, and FF is quite a wonderful concept, because she just seems like a tag-along-friend, because of the way she 'idolized Clio' which is such a believeable personality trait although makes her seem quite... irritating, from first glance.
Splitting the different types of inspiration is pretty damn awesome actually.
Unfortunatly I don't think she'll ever be able to beat down BFF, It's just... it's a part of FF as much as good stuff is. People have to suck at writing before they get good at writing. You don't pick up an instument you've never so much as HELD before and audition to go to Juliard or something, it takes work. - Kinda duscussing outside of your fic here, forgive me -
Great fic though, I really liked it :)
Now that I'm not constantly in capitals I can start to review this without hurting your eyes :) I hate all caps. It just looks Noob-ish. It hurts my head to read it.
I don't think it would be at ALL easy to be a muse, because people just hate you all of the time. Constantly about having too much muse, or not enough, it's just a thankless job!
-As you will have quickly realized my review style is spodratic and ramblish. And Long.
I like this story, It almost reminds me of Storm's series, but it's been pulled off in a unique way, and FF is quite a wonderful concept, because she just seems like a tag-along-friend, because of the way she 'idolized Clio' which is such a believeable personality trait although makes her seem quite... irritating, from first glance.
Splitting the different types of inspiration is pretty damn awesome actually.
Unfortunatly I don't think she'll ever be able to beat down BFF, It's just... it's a part of FF as much as good stuff is. People have to suck at writing before they get good at writing. You don't pick up an instument you've never so much as HELD before and audition to go to Juliard or something, it takes work. - Kinda duscussing outside of your fic here, forgive me -
Great fic though, I really liked it :)
7/25/2010 c1 8AC Thorn
Haihai Cree. :D
I like this. It's creative, and yeah...(They have a Parodies section...?) Sorry. I'm not too huge on these things. But you're speshulful. *has made an exception to the anti-plotless-parody-policy*
Like I said, you're missing some words and spaces and such and the ending seems a bit abrupt, but otherwise...nice. :)
-Thorn
8AC ThornHaihai Cree. :D
I like this. It's creative, and yeah...(They have a Parodies section...?) Sorry. I'm not too huge on these things. But you're speshulful. *has made an exception to the anti-plotless-parody-policy*
Like I said, you're missing some words and spaces and such and the ending seems a bit abrupt, but otherwise...nice. :)
-Thorn