for The Beginning of Bad Fanfiction7/25/2010 c1 Hera's Daughter
Ha! I liked that. An original idea, definatly, and it was interesting. I wonder, are you going to continue this? Or is it a One-Shot?
I would give you CC, but considering you ARE CC yourself, I doubt you even need it.
Ha! I liked that. An original idea, definatly, and it was interesting. I wonder, are you going to continue this? Or is it a One-Shot?
I would give you CC, but considering you ARE CC yourself, I doubt you even need it.
7/23/2010 c1 Your Sugar Sits Untouched
Good job, Critic. I liked it :) It seemed to get almost a bit rushed near the end, but I didn't see any major problems with the fic.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this.
Good job, Critic. I liked it :) It seemed to get almost a bit rushed near the end, but I didn't see any major problems with the fic.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this.
7/23/2010 c1 
1SharpenedPencil
I think there's some repetitiveness and some unneeded stuff, like I told you earlier, but good job :D This turned out great!
And, ahem, Rachel- I have been wanting to give Critic her first review on her story for a very long time now BUT I'm getting over it ;)
Honestly Critic, this story sounds like it could be true. Fanfiction HAS been going down the toilet lately... *clears throat* but anyway, good job, loved it, all that ;)
1SharpenedPencilI think there's some repetitiveness and some unneeded stuff, like I told you earlier, but good job :D This turned out great!
And, ahem, Rachel- I have been wanting to give Critic her first review on her story for a very long time now BUT I'm getting over it ;)
Honestly Critic, this story sounds like it could be true. Fanfiction HAS been going down the toilet lately... *clears throat* but anyway, good job, loved it, all that ;)
7/23/2010 c1 Ariadne's Twine
Hm... Definitely a creative idea. I did notice a few major/minor mistake, like fanfiction.net disappearing 'cause it was the full link.
A few skipped words here and there. Good job, Critic.
I'd give it a 7.5/10. Maybe 8/10.
Kudos, my dear friend. And good luck with future writings.
Thanks, much.
~Rachel.
Hm... Definitely a creative idea. I did notice a few major/minor mistake, like fanfiction.net disappearing 'cause it was the full link.
A few skipped words here and there. Good job, Critic.
I'd give it a 7.5/10. Maybe 8/10.
Kudos, my dear friend. And good luck with future writings.
Thanks, much.
~Rachel.