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11/1/2010 c5 SappyCrap
I LIKE

KEEP WRITING
8/23/2010 c1 2What a B1tch
Aw, poor Alexis . . .

Oh, wait, we don't care.

Honestly, this is boring, your writing sucks, your character is a blatant Mary Sue, and you can't f.ucking write dialogue to save your life. Do you know what grammar is, sweetie? You don't? Oh, I'm sorry. Then you should go back to second grade.

Delete this or get a beta reader.

-Lover of Gone

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