for Champions9/12 c48 SirCharlieIII
Reviewing to say that this is story may have been stolen and added on AO3 with another name. On AO3 the name is "The Flowers Savior" by IronAngel88. I'm sorry if it's the author that put the story there.
Reviewing to say that this is story may have been stolen and added on AO3 with another name. On AO3 the name is "The Flowers Savior" by IronAngel88. I'm sorry if it's the author that put the story there.
9/10 c48 Guest
Not too bad this. While i think you laid it on a bit hard with all the abused child bit - which if you consider the how harry behaved in the originals is quite far from how he turned out here, it was a good read. Granted, this is an AU of sorts so it explains the far worse dursley experience, but i feel that Dumbledore's reasoning in the end was far too… how should i say, out of the blue? Weak? Uncharacteristic? What, going from his whole good wizard fighting the European tyrant philosophy which resulted in him fighting Johny Depp to causing a kid to suffer just so he could get a double kill title? Going from the ‘Greater Good’ to something selfish? Its just too far from who he actually is as a person. Dark or light, dumbles has always been a greater good sort of guy. Your dumbles is too far from that, not to mention his lack of fact checking, which for someone so manipulative and controlling, is another clear inconsistency.
Either way, thats just a little bit at the end and a decent time within the novel where he should have checked, but its just me asking for a more true to character representation of everyone’s favourite gramps high on E numbers.
Either way, good work!
Not too bad this. While i think you laid it on a bit hard with all the abused child bit - which if you consider the how harry behaved in the originals is quite far from how he turned out here, it was a good read. Granted, this is an AU of sorts so it explains the far worse dursley experience, but i feel that Dumbledore's reasoning in the end was far too… how should i say, out of the blue? Weak? Uncharacteristic? What, going from his whole good wizard fighting the European tyrant philosophy which resulted in him fighting Johny Depp to causing a kid to suffer just so he could get a double kill title? Going from the ‘Greater Good’ to something selfish? Its just too far from who he actually is as a person. Dark or light, dumbles has always been a greater good sort of guy. Your dumbles is too far from that, not to mention his lack of fact checking, which for someone so manipulative and controlling, is another clear inconsistency.
Either way, thats just a little bit at the end and a decent time within the novel where he should have checked, but its just me asking for a more true to character representation of everyone’s favourite gramps high on E numbers.
Either way, good work!
8/31 c38 maiqsmail
I'm starting to think that the only existing curse breaker in the whole magical world is Bill Weasel.
I'm starting to think that the only existing curse breaker in the whole magical world is Bill Weasel.
8/31 c31 maiqsmail
Ron bashing? How is this bashing if it's all in-character and canon-compliant?
Yes, I don't like the weasel, how could you tell?
Ron bashing? How is this bashing if it's all in-character and canon-compliant?
Yes, I don't like the weasel, how could you tell?
8/30 c20 maiqsmail
His guardians are french. Prophet and Minister are owned by Malfoy. Hogwarts is run by Dumbles who proved to be an enemy here.
What's stopping Harry from ditching Britain and moving to France permanently?
His guardians are french. Prophet and Minister are owned by Malfoy. Hogwarts is run by Dumbles who proved to be an enemy here.
What's stopping Harry from ditching Britain and moving to France permanently?
8/30 c17 maiqsmail
Kinda OOC for Molly. Yes, she's an overbearing bint in canon, but only for her own brood. We have seen a contrast when she would lay into Ronald then turn to Harry and call him "Harry, dear".
More IC for her in this situation would be to go to someone with more authority and straighten things out. Logically, that would be first Arthur, then Dumbles, with letters fired up to her in-school children to get more info meanwhile.
Kinda OOC for Molly. Yes, she's an overbearing bint in canon, but only for her own brood. We have seen a contrast when she would lay into Ronald then turn to Harry and call him "Harry, dear".
More IC for her in this situation would be to go to someone with more authority and straighten things out. Logically, that would be first Arthur, then Dumbles, with letters fired up to her in-school children to get more info meanwhile.
8/29 c4 maiqsmail
I like flowerpot pairing but the way most of the stories do it is just... meh... Basically inventing fanon out of thin air to justify a highly unlikely pairing. Veela bonds, life debts, coupled time travel, MC time travel to boost his "mental" age to match her... I dunno, seems kinda reaching to me. The fact that she is only introduced at 3wt start doesn't help at all.
I really liked A Cadmean Victory, it had a more natural feeling to the pairing and its progression, even if MC had to go OOC there (basically flipped to slytherin-pragmatic side and decided to take a responsibility for his life), but that's one way to do it, I guess.
I like flowerpot pairing but the way most of the stories do it is just... meh... Basically inventing fanon out of thin air to justify a highly unlikely pairing. Veela bonds, life debts, coupled time travel, MC time travel to boost his "mental" age to match her... I dunno, seems kinda reaching to me. The fact that she is only introduced at 3wt start doesn't help at all.
I really liked A Cadmean Victory, it had a more natural feeling to the pairing and its progression, even if MC had to go OOC there (basically flipped to slytherin-pragmatic side and decided to take a responsibility for his life), but that's one way to do it, I guess.
8/27 c4 Broadsky
I believe your story is being stolen on ao3 httpsarchiveofourown under the name of The Flowers Savior by IronAngel88. So far it looks like 1-1 solid copy
I believe your story is being stolen on ao3 httpsarchiveofourown under the name of The Flowers Savior by IronAngel88. So far it looks like 1-1 solid copy
8/20 c48 
2ElfOwl
This has to be one of my favorite stories of all time. And that's saying something. Thank you for finishing it!
2ElfOwlThis has to be one of my favorite stories of all time. And that's saying something. Thank you for finishing it!
8/16 c5 Razer Granger
i have read this book several times. i love this book. i really love the epilogue because it explains everyone
i have read this book several times. i love this book. i really love the epilogue because it explains everyone
7/30 c35 skaviouz
I know this chapter (35) is an old chapter, and that the story has already been completed as there is an epilogue at chapter 48; but you mentioned Malfoy being the whims of fiction god, a moment of inspiration, but I can think up some ideals where this is a positive event for Malfoy. Just imagine, Malfoy wants to stay away from the Dark Lord, he doesn't want his son to get involved with Voldy. I am not saying that he planned to get arrested and sent to prison, but perhaps he wanted to be in the spot light and "prove" his position, so that when all is said and done in the future, he can tell the dark lord he's always set up his position and stature to be opposed to all of voldy's enemies while trying to feign his allegiance. I think that's the basis of his political career?
I know this chapter (35) is an old chapter, and that the story has already been completed as there is an epilogue at chapter 48; but you mentioned Malfoy being the whims of fiction god, a moment of inspiration, but I can think up some ideals where this is a positive event for Malfoy. Just imagine, Malfoy wants to stay away from the Dark Lord, he doesn't want his son to get involved with Voldy. I am not saying that he planned to get arrested and sent to prison, but perhaps he wanted to be in the spot light and "prove" his position, so that when all is said and done in the future, he can tell the dark lord he's always set up his position and stature to be opposed to all of voldy's enemies while trying to feign his allegiance. I think that's the basis of his political career?