for Champions5/10/2023 c48 
4rpeh
I'm glad I found this story.
I'm not going to go into a detailed review since the story is done and dusted but in basic terms, it started well, kept going well and ended well - although the epilogue was a little... excessive. It's true that everything happens a bit too easily but there's enough stuff along the way to keep things interesting. The Ron- and Dumbledore-bashing wasn't excessive and the other characters were developed and varied enough too.
Thanks for a fine story.
4rpehI'm glad I found this story.
I'm not going to go into a detailed review since the story is done and dusted but in basic terms, it started well, kept going well and ended well - although the epilogue was a little... excessive. It's true that everything happens a bit too easily but there's enough stuff along the way to keep things interesting. The Ron- and Dumbledore-bashing wasn't excessive and the other characters were developed and varied enough too.
Thanks for a fine story.
5/6/2023 c31 Lynn
Canon Dumbles didn't train him, left him to be abused to be self sacrificing and have no self worth or esteem.
Harry Gets murdered, killing the scar shard, Dumbles racks up his second dark lord
Taa daaa!
Canon Dumbles didn't train him, left him to be abused to be self sacrificing and have no self worth or esteem.
Harry Gets murdered, killing the scar shard, Dumbles racks up his second dark lord
Taa daaa!
5/3/2023 c42 Guest
It doesn't need to be original... it just has to be so obvious the organizers look like idiots.
You nailed it.
It doesn't need to be original... it just has to be so obvious the organizers look like idiots.
You nailed it.
5/3/2023 c31 Guest
Yeah. Ron has the potential to be a great ally... and a horrible enemy.
I've met people very similar to Ron, and have a rather overly-emotional brain that makes me predisposed to similar terrible ways of thinking.
It takes effort to change yourself. Ron could have done that. He never does. Not really.
You can tolerate and work with someone like Ron, but you should not willingly surround yourself with those people.
(A bit of advice for those like Ron who want to be better - remind yourself to FEEL your love for those close to you. Even if you have irrational tendencies, love goes a long way to blunt that. Ron had a little of this, but as the years went by, he showed his love less and less.)
Yeah. Ron has the potential to be a great ally... and a horrible enemy.
I've met people very similar to Ron, and have a rather overly-emotional brain that makes me predisposed to similar terrible ways of thinking.
It takes effort to change yourself. Ron could have done that. He never does. Not really.
You can tolerate and work with someone like Ron, but you should not willingly surround yourself with those people.
(A bit of advice for those like Ron who want to be better - remind yourself to FEEL your love for those close to you. Even if you have irrational tendencies, love goes a long way to blunt that. Ron had a little of this, but as the years went by, he showed his love less and less.)
5/3/2023 c23 Guest
I love seeing Fawkes with a personality (other than "bland symbol of good" or "long-suffering."
Here, Fawkes reminds me of another well-known(ish) fictional phoenix - Philomena, from My Little Pony, who has a subtle but strong prankster streak a mile wide. (Implied is that she got it from her owner/friend Celestia, who is mostly seen trying to get people to lighten up and stop treating her like a god.)
I love seeing Fawkes with a personality (other than "bland symbol of good" or "long-suffering."
Here, Fawkes reminds me of another well-known(ish) fictional phoenix - Philomena, from My Little Pony, who has a subtle but strong prankster streak a mile wide. (Implied is that she got it from her owner/friend Celestia, who is mostly seen trying to get people to lighten up and stop treating her like a god.)
5/3/2023 c10 Guest
Whike I like the character of Snape (especially Movie!Snape), I abdolutely detest the man personally, and dislike Dumbledore using Hogwarts as a storage place for the people he has acquired instead of a school.
Whike I like the character of Snape (especially Movie!Snape), I abdolutely detest the man personally, and dislike Dumbledore using Hogwarts as a storage place for the people he has acquired instead of a school.
5/3/2023 c48 23FenreldStormblade
amazing story. gave me more than a few laughs. I throughly enjoyed it
23FenreldStormbladeamazing story. gave me more than a few laughs. I throughly enjoyed it
4/27/2023 c48 4freedomringer
This is literally my second favorite Potter Fanfic after Harry Potter Moore universe.
4freedomringerThis is literally my second favorite Potter Fanfic after Harry Potter Moore universe.
4/24/2023 c19 Guest
I hope it was on purpose for Fleur’s initials to become FAP
I hope it was on purpose for Fleur’s initials to become FAP
4/22/2023 c34 noylj
Nothing good about the tournament, other than rescuing Fleur.
Did they charge Snivy for attempted murder? Did they punish the aurors that left him with a wand?
What happened with the obstruction charge?
Why didn't Harry Accio wand(s)?
Nothing good about the tournament, other than rescuing Fleur.
Did they charge Snivy for attempted murder? Did they punish the aurors that left him with a wand?
What happened with the obstruction charge?
Why didn't Harry Accio wand(s)?
4/16/2023 c48 omh666
Hahahahahaa! I adore how Snape died. That was awesome!. This was really nice. It gives solid closure on each character anyone might have cared about. I was curious what was going to be in this chapter, given you tied up ends so well in the previous one. Well done and thank you for writing it, and again for posting here for us to read.
Hahahahahaa! I adore how Snape died. That was awesome!. This was really nice. It gives solid closure on each character anyone might have cared about. I was curious what was going to be in this chapter, given you tied up ends so well in the previous one. Well done and thank you for writing it, and again for posting here for us to read.
4/16/2023 c47 omh666
And that ties up nearly all threads. Looking forward to the epilogue. This has been a rather enjoyable read. I'm glad I came back across it.
And that ties up nearly all threads. Looking forward to the epilogue. This has been a rather enjoyable read. I'm glad I came back across it.