for Champions4/14/2023 c27 omh666
And now we get a look into Mrs. Potter's flaws as well. The ones she began the story with seemed to vanish quickly, so I'm glad to see new ones getting explored.
And now we get a look into Mrs. Potter's flaws as well. The ones she began the story with seemed to vanish quickly, so I'm glad to see new ones getting explored.
4/14/2023 c24 omh666
I think my fave line in this chapter was:
"One other thing," said Harry in a soft, dangerous tone that utterly intimidated even Fleur. "I did not hire Mr. Howe. I hope you're planning on paying
him, Headmaster, because I certainly won't."
On it's face, such a simple statement. However, it shows more about how much Harry is understanding the situation.
I think my fave line in this chapter was:
"One other thing," said Harry in a soft, dangerous tone that utterly intimidated even Fleur. "I did not hire Mr. Howe. I hope you're planning on paying
him, Headmaster, because I certainly won't."
On it's face, such a simple statement. However, it shows more about how much Harry is understanding the situation.
4/14/2023 c23 omh666
Technically speaking, Hermione never actually meets Fawkes in the books. After Dumbledore's funeral, he flies around the grounds while singing his song of morning, but from how it's described in the book, he is out of sight while doing so. I don't know if she ever went to Dumbledore's office either. Aah, wait! I think she sees him once. I believe it was book five, where he flames into the headquarters, drops a parchment, and flames out. But again, the way it's described, he does it so fast, they might not have even seen Fawkes.
Technically speaking, Hermione never actually meets Fawkes in the books. After Dumbledore's funeral, he flies around the grounds while singing his song of morning, but from how it's described in the book, he is out of sight while doing so. I don't know if she ever went to Dumbledore's office either. Aah, wait! I think she sees him once. I believe it was book five, where he flames into the headquarters, drops a parchment, and flames out. But again, the way it's described, he does it so fast, they might not have even seen Fawkes.
4/14/2023 c22 omh666
I always love seeing how people portray Falks. We get so little about him that it leaves the paths open, but unlike most other characters, we have little to no fan template to work with for him. Greengrass for example, so many authors have shown her a certain way that it has created a bit of a template.
I always love seeing how people portray Falks. We get so little about him that it leaves the paths open, but unlike most other characters, we have little to no fan template to work with for him. Greengrass for example, so many authors have shown her a certain way that it has created a bit of a template.
4/14/2023 c21 omh666
Hahahahahaa! I love it! That conversation between Dumbledore and Harry was fantastic.
Hahahahahaa! I love it! That conversation between Dumbledore and Harry was fantastic.
4/14/2023 c20 omh666
I like how you handled the whole thing with Ginny. It blends well the childish infatuation and the adult reality.
I like how you handled the whole thing with Ginny. It blends well the childish infatuation and the adult reality.
64/13/2023 c17 cameron1812
Love Sebastien taking the Weasley's onMolly specificallyhere. Talk about having someone in your corner!
Love Sebastien taking the Weasley's onMolly specificallyhere. Talk about having someone in your corner!
4/13/2023 c24 the chosen ones twin
yo you can't say worst than rape unless you've actually been raped and legilimized which isn't real so...
yo you can't say worst than rape unless you've actually been raped and legilimized which isn't real so...