for Champions4/13/2023 c2 omh666
That was a nice improv, when he acted like he could get rid of, and likely kill Harry for them. I don't think I've read that in another fic.
That was a nice improv, when he acted like he could get rid of, and likely kill Harry for them. I don't think I've read that in another fic.
3/31/2023 c5 Marshman101
That was so heart-warming and so sugary sweet that if the internet could give me diabetes then I would have it 100x over, I mean I would be dead but worth it.
That was so heart-warming and so sugary sweet that if the internet could give me diabetes then I would have it 100x over, I mean I would be dead but worth it.
3/28/2023 c48 Jen
Thanks!
Thanks!
3/21/2023 c15 Dretnuh
*My language nerd ass going to google translate the one French word I don’t understand in the sentence*
Come back and the next paragraph Fleur translates it for me lmao.
*My language nerd ass going to google translate the one French word I don’t understand in the sentence*
Come back and the next paragraph Fleur translates it for me lmao.
3/18/2023 c48 Hacura
I just found this story and I’m so glad I did. I love HP/FD stories. I will definitely re-read this in the future.
I just found this story and I’m so glad I did. I love HP/FD stories. I will definitely re-read this in the future.
3/13/2023 c48 Guest
Shoving Hermione into the relationship was horrible.
Shoving Hermione into the relationship was horrible.
3/13/2023 c23 Baz62
Why is there not a competition to come up with the most original and painful method of killing Ron Weasley? I personally feel that he should be destroyed at the beginning of every story and Molly should be a close second along with Snape.
Why is there not a competition to come up with the most original and painful method of killing Ron Weasley? I personally feel that he should be destroyed at the beginning of every story and Molly should be a close second along with Snape.
3/11/2023 c48 SamonIllmantrim
This was an incredibly fun and satisfying story to read from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing this.
This was an incredibly fun and satisfying story to read from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing this.
3/10/2023 c48 Guest
ty for the story
ty for the story
3/10/2023 c48 iChaos
First and most importantly, I appreciate that you have shared a finished Fleur and Harry story. There aren't nearly enough of these, in my opinion at least. The writing quality is good and the story itself was rather sweet, for the most part. The circumstances forcing Fleur and Harry together were plausible, but the believability of the narrative did suffer a bit from having too many drastic changes in such a short amount of time. It also bothed me a little that you used the same basic tactic of several characters trying to blatantly curse the protagonists in the back (or face) and then getting caught and punished immediately. It was effective, but repetitive. I thought that it was particularly strange that Snape got away with attempting to assassinate Harry right in the courtroom, but apparently suffered no further consequences. That being said, my favorite part was probably the way that all four of the champions worked together to get the drop on the big bad (and I was also very amused by the BtVS references). To be honest, I was somewhat disappointed with the epilogue only because the relationship between Hermione, Fleur and Harry didn't really feel supported by the content of the whole story and frankly seemed a little demeaning to Hermione and sort of just tacked on. I was actually hoping that there would be some kind of further development of the relationship between Fawkes and Fleur or maybe veela and phoenix in general. Easy for me to say after the fact, but it feels like a missed opportunity. Regardless, with the exception of so many lengthy notes that really detract from the presentation of a complete fic, I did enjoy reading it.
First and most importantly, I appreciate that you have shared a finished Fleur and Harry story. There aren't nearly enough of these, in my opinion at least. The writing quality is good and the story itself was rather sweet, for the most part. The circumstances forcing Fleur and Harry together were plausible, but the believability of the narrative did suffer a bit from having too many drastic changes in such a short amount of time. It also bothed me a little that you used the same basic tactic of several characters trying to blatantly curse the protagonists in the back (or face) and then getting caught and punished immediately. It was effective, but repetitive. I thought that it was particularly strange that Snape got away with attempting to assassinate Harry right in the courtroom, but apparently suffered no further consequences. That being said, my favorite part was probably the way that all four of the champions worked together to get the drop on the big bad (and I was also very amused by the BtVS references). To be honest, I was somewhat disappointed with the epilogue only because the relationship between Hermione, Fleur and Harry didn't really feel supported by the content of the whole story and frankly seemed a little demeaning to Hermione and sort of just tacked on. I was actually hoping that there would be some kind of further development of the relationship between Fawkes and Fleur or maybe veela and phoenix in general. Easy for me to say after the fact, but it feels like a missed opportunity. Regardless, with the exception of so many lengthy notes that really detract from the presentation of a complete fic, I did enjoy reading it.
3/8/2023 c48 Gimme DaGoods
i just has to leave this review cuz I saw a lot of people saying otherwise, bu the ending you had for Hermione. i've always supported her and Harry. But I fell in love with the HarryxFleur ship because of your story. So the way I see it, this a great combination of both. Well done. Very well done
i just has to leave this review cuz I saw a lot of people saying otherwise, bu the ending you had for Hermione. i've always supported her and Harry. But I fell in love with the HarryxFleur ship because of your story. So the way I see it, this a great combination of both. Well done. Very well done