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10/18/2022 c25 WeisseHex
Minerva might want to just go ahead and punch Dumblefuck square on the nose!
10/18/2022 c22 WeisseHex
The first time in awhile, but Harry used his wits admirably in this chapter. Good!
10/18/2022 c19 WeisseHex
It was very beautiful! I loved their ceremony, nice and quick! But very different, no?
10/18/2022 c18 WeisseHex
YOU know, don't you, Harrikins, that Ron will open his maw of a mouth, right?
10/18/2022 c48 major wallace
Nice work
10/16/2022 c7 mehwhatever
I can assure you there is nothing less endearing than a complete lack of confidence. But then this whole premise for a story is something you’d only write if you have no experience in a relationship.
10/12/2022 c48 Cloudy09
Out of curiosity I checked up this fanfiction again and Jesus Christ it has been almost 12 since this released. I was here when it started and I gave it up for dead and now I come back to it being resurrected and finished.

Thanks for the hard work mate. I appreciate a fanfic author that comes back and finishes their story. I hope the best for you and have fun!
10/10/2022 c3 Guest
LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
10/3/2022 c22 Coul532003
I had refrained from adding a review on the mistaken thought that you were inactive. My mistake was corrected, so I leave a few thoughts.
First, I really enjoy this story. I may have read an earlier, unfinished version, but am enjoying now as well. Second, why would anyone care if it was Arielle or Apoline, when Sebastian is frequently Jean, Jean-Luc, Francois, or other? Same with Hermione's parents (Dan & Emma, Richard & Jean, etc.) Not to mention Hermione Jane or Hemione Jean, Harry, Harrison, or Hadrian Potter and so forth. Within reason, that must be author's prerogative. Being Harrison or Hadrian did not seem to keep Harry out of the TWT, did it? Glad that is out of the way.
Above all, thank you for being able to find a muse to let you continue to share your story-telling abilities with us.
9/29/2022 c48 1lindleya1
That was a very fun ride. I don't necessarily see canon Dumbledore as bad as this version, as you said, it's not that far off when you think about it (I have thoughts about that Halloween night that nobody ever seems to mention). Also, was Malfoy's fate in the epilogue a reference. I seem to remember reading a story ages ago where Snape flees Britain, and ends up as a chef in Australia
9/28/2022 c42 5mongodatroll
I admit I had thought they would simply take turns burning it down, I even expected smores to be a thing just to rub it in. But this worked fine as well.
9/24/2022 c5 Guest
Hi
9/24/2022 c1 Guest
Nb
9/22/2022 c25 9Itack23
Another occurrence of "cochon" that would be better worded as "porcs" (with the final s for the plural too) ;)

Nice chapter, McGonagall is on board now!
And CONGRATS on the 5k reviews! :D
9/22/2022 c48 Vampireking40
Great story yet I am going to have to actually fully read it to understand everything. I take it the McG was given the Headmistress position as she was the best choice. I am curious what happen to Fudge and his Toady. I did enjoy the part where Percy got fired for incompetence. Ron well he got what he deserved. I am glad Molly never tried to rob Harry as her oldest children especially Bill would not have wanted to turn his own mother over to the Goblins for theft form the Potter family.
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