for Champions7/28/2010 c6 gunners.alien
Well, Hermione's reaction was a tad weak. Though this is a Harry/Fleur story, so maybe this is the best way to go about. If not it will be a Harry/Hermione/Fleur story.
Thanks for the fast update. 2 chapters in 1 day!
Well, Hermione's reaction was a tad weak. Though this is a Harry/Fleur story, so maybe this is the best way to go about. If not it will be a Harry/Hermione/Fleur story.
Thanks for the fast update. 2 chapters in 1 day!
7/28/2010 c6 ladywatertiger
Your portrayal of Hermione is kind, so far she seems not as bossy or overly trusting of Wizarding adults (Dumbledore McGonagal Weasleys).
Her comments about Ron and somewhat unhappiness at his reaction to Fleur make me wonder if she is interested in dating Ron?
I rarely like Harry with Ginny or a domineering Hermione.
I like him paired with rare pairings Slytherins Daphne Blaise or Pansy. I like Luna Lovegood, Susan Bones, Hannah Abbot. Original Characters and x-overs Wednesday Addams, Buffy Summers even some LOTR mostly family Harry is Istari or Elf.
I'm looking forward to seeing this story continue.
Your portrayal of Hermione is kind, so far she seems not as bossy or overly trusting of Wizarding adults (Dumbledore McGonagal Weasleys).
Her comments about Ron and somewhat unhappiness at his reaction to Fleur make me wonder if she is interested in dating Ron?
I rarely like Harry with Ginny or a domineering Hermione.
I like him paired with rare pairings Slytherins Daphne Blaise or Pansy. I like Luna Lovegood, Susan Bones, Hannah Abbot. Original Characters and x-overs Wednesday Addams, Buffy Summers even some LOTR mostly family Harry is Istari or Elf.
I'm looking forward to seeing this story continue.
7/28/2010 c6 
3Hakkyou no Yami
well I have to say this a good reaction from her...and it was to expected.
3Hakkyou no Yamiwell I have to say this a good reaction from her...and it was to expected.
7/28/2010 c6 Slytherin66
EXcellent chapter I am glad Harry is not letting the Weasleys stopping him from being happy they are the Headmasters loyal followers and not doubt they have been well paid to look after Harry.
I am so pleased that Harry and Hermione now see what type of person Ron is. Without help Ron will fail at everything and be happy about it so I look forward to Ron ending up in the Ministry with his father doing nothing all day.
I hope when new gets out about Harry and Fleur Harry won't just accept the rant Molly Weasley is going to give him.
Hermione might have reacted more strongly but even she
EXcellent chapter I am glad Harry is not letting the Weasleys stopping him from being happy they are the Headmasters loyal followers and not doubt they have been well paid to look after Harry.
I am so pleased that Harry and Hermione now see what type of person Ron is. Without help Ron will fail at everything and be happy about it so I look forward to Ron ending up in the Ministry with his father doing nothing all day.
I hope when new gets out about Harry and Fleur Harry won't just accept the rant Molly Weasley is going to give him.
Hermione might have reacted more strongly but even she
7/28/2010 c5 Slytherin66
A very good chapter Harry and Gabrielle were so cute I hope Fleur and Mrs Delacour have fun with the photo.
Harry's home life was dealt with well just right, the calming charm was a good idea.
A very good chapter Harry and Gabrielle were so cute I hope Fleur and Mrs Delacour have fun with the photo.
Harry's home life was dealt with well just right, the calming charm was a good idea.
7/28/2010 c6 11chariots99
Wow, this is one of the most unique story ideas I've seen. I love where it! Is Harry going to go live with Sirius then? Hang on...yeah, Sirius is still alive in the fourth book. So, is he going to live with him? Anyways, yeah, great story! xox
11chariots99Wow, this is one of the most unique story ideas I've seen. I love where it! Is Harry going to go live with Sirius then? Hang on...yeah, Sirius is still alive in the fourth book. So, is he going to live with him? Anyways, yeah, great story! xox
7/28/2010 c6 crazyjim87
I love this pair very much and this story is very good from what i read so far but i was wondering ,are you going to leave harry like he was in the books, and i mean an idiot that didn't study much and won by luck? Because i would like to see him study and start studying on his own if need be ancient runes.
I love this pair very much and this story is very good from what i read so far but i was wondering ,are you going to leave harry like he was in the books, and i mean an idiot that didn't study much and won by luck? Because i would like to see him study and start studying on his own if need be ancient runes.
7/27/2010 c5 gunners.alien
Another good chapter. The scene of Harry with Gabrielle sleeping on top of him is just cute! And for Harry's response of Sebastian telling him about the Dursley, I think is spot on. A child who has been abuse of his life and no self confidence will act as what you have portrayed him.
Well, thats it from me. Post more soon!
Another good chapter. The scene of Harry with Gabrielle sleeping on top of him is just cute! And for Harry's response of Sebastian telling him about the Dursley, I think is spot on. A child who has been abuse of his life and no self confidence will act as what you have portrayed him.
Well, thats it from me. Post more soon!
7/27/2010 c5 ORKCHILD
First off love the story. Second off if you are seeking to end your unemployment try looking at employment oppertunities at acs-inc.com. and look in your area lots of it is really mindless but it is work.
First off love the story. Second off if you are seeking to end your unemployment try looking at employment oppertunities at acs-inc.com. and look in your area lots of it is really mindless but it is work.