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7Tentrees
I see potential for many things in this story. I like and hope you post more soon.
7TentreesI see potential for many things in this story. I like and hope you post more soon.
7/26/2010 c3 super12
Like the chapter but I hope you don't write that Dumbles has been steeling from Harry, thats a really cliche. Other then that this is a really good story.
Like the chapter but I hope you don't write that Dumbles has been steeling from Harry, thats a really cliche. Other then that this is a really good story.
7/26/2010 c3 Belle Morte Rising
Another amazing chapter, love the interwoven story parts, i adore that it seems they have alot to overcome to help Harry, it makes the story all that much more fun to read, can't wait to learn the specifics of what is happening with Fleur, and to see how you have Harry react.
Another amazing chapter, love the interwoven story parts, i adore that it seems they have alot to overcome to help Harry, it makes the story all that much more fun to read, can't wait to learn the specifics of what is happening with Fleur, and to see how you have Harry react.
7/26/2010 c3 9tumshie
I'm enjoying this, but MI-5 is Military Intellegence Section 5 and would have nothing to do with bringing Court cases. MI-5 doesn't even have powers of arrest, they would work through either the Anti-Terrorist Squad of the Police or Special Branch.
Prosecutions in England are brought by the Crown Prosecution Service, based on evidence gathered by the Police, and it would be Surrey Police that would investigate to gather the evidence.
9tumshieI'm enjoying this, but MI-5 is Military Intellegence Section 5 and would have nothing to do with bringing Court cases. MI-5 doesn't even have powers of arrest, they would work through either the Anti-Terrorist Squad of the Police or Special Branch.
Prosecutions in England are brought by the Crown Prosecution Service, based on evidence gathered by the Police, and it would be Surrey Police that would investigate to gather the evidence.
7/26/2010 c3 40demonicnargles
Well, well, well. Looks good so far. I'll keep watching for more!
-demonicnargles
40demonicnarglesWell, well, well. Looks good so far. I'll keep watching for more!
-demonicnargles
7/26/2010 c3 92DJ Rodriguez
^^ This story holds much potential to be one of the best fics I have read! Hope to see an update soon! Keep it up!
92DJ Rodriguez^^ This story holds much potential to be one of the best fics I have read! Hope to see an update soon! Keep it up!
7/26/2010 c3 gunners.alien
Great story. I was cautious initially on reading a new story with only a few chapters posted and with small chapters,in terms of length.
But, when I started reading it, I can tell that this can be one of the classics of a Harry Potter fanfic if this kind of writing continues.
Keep up the good work and post soon.
PS:Finish this one 1st then start on the more in depth story that you have in mind.That way, you can focus everything on 1 story.
Great story. I was cautious initially on reading a new story with only a few chapters posted and with small chapters,in terms of length.
But, when I started reading it, I can tell that this can be one of the classics of a Harry Potter fanfic if this kind of writing continues.
Keep up the good work and post soon.
PS:Finish this one 1st then start on the more in depth story that you have in mind.That way, you can focus everything on 1 story.
7/26/2010 c3 TNT220
Brilliant chapter, ou've done it again. The characters and their actions are exceptionally well made and I love that you also manage to introduce Tonks here :-) (Tonks, Fleur and Luna are my favorite characters).
Not trying to rush things at all, but I do look forward to the meeting of Fleur and Harry.
Thanks for a great read
Brilliant chapter, ou've done it again. The characters and their actions are exceptionally well made and I love that you also manage to introduce Tonks here :-) (Tonks, Fleur and Luna are my favorite characters).
Not trying to rush things at all, but I do look forward to the meeting of Fleur and Harry.
Thanks for a great read
7/26/2010 c3 OakDarkleaf
Thank You! I always thought Dumbles was sick for trying to bend fate/prophesy to his will. Supposedly prophesy takes care of itself, with or without assistance from manipulative old fools.
Thank You! I always thought Dumbles was sick for trying to bend fate/prophesy to his will. Supposedly prophesy takes care of itself, with or without assistance from manipulative old fools.
7/26/2010 c3 srizkm
I'm enjoying this story and the direction that you are taking things. I've always enjoyed those stories that play with the political landscape and it'll be interesting to see how you bring in the Goblins, as well as Harry's reaction to all of this.
Keep going!
I'm enjoying this story and the direction that you are taking things. I've always enjoyed those stories that play with the political landscape and it'll be interesting to see how you bring in the Goblins, as well as Harry's reaction to all of this.
Keep going!
7/26/2010 c3 3Hakkyou no Yami
now someone good in the government knows of this mess things for Harry will be getting good...let's just hope that he don't freak out and take it like a man.
3Hakkyou no Yaminow someone good in the government knows of this mess things for Harry will be getting good...let's just hope that he don't freak out and take it like a man.