for Champions7/25/2010 c2 
7Tentrees
Never mess with a truely competant politician. For what I have seen in this chapter Sebastian could run rings around both Dumbledore an dMalfoy and leavve them sitting in the coner like naughty children.
I would love to see the 'Q&A" session he is about to put them through. Hopefully it is enough to hammer the LORD GOD DUMBLEDORE off his high pedastal. Yes I dispise the man. He takes on to much to himself, takes no counsel that we can see and can no longer see the trees in the forest.
7TentreesNever mess with a truely competant politician. For what I have seen in this chapter Sebastian could run rings around both Dumbledore an dMalfoy and leavve them sitting in the coner like naughty children.
I would love to see the 'Q&A" session he is about to put them through. Hopefully it is enough to hammer the LORD GOD DUMBLEDORE off his high pedastal. Yes I dispise the man. He takes on to much to himself, takes no counsel that we can see and can no longer see the trees in the forest.
7/25/2010 c2 Belle Morte Rising
Can i just say wow and thanks for a great story so far, love your attention to detail and love the idea of how the life dept was formed, not to mention having Fleur's father looking into Harrys life for himself first. Adore your writing style so far and will be waiting on the edge of my seat for more.
Can i just say wow and thanks for a great story so far, love your attention to detail and love the idea of how the life dept was formed, not to mention having Fleur's father looking into Harrys life for himself first. Adore your writing style so far and will be waiting on the edge of my seat for more.
7/25/2010 c2 yamamoto1803
i have to say that i am enjoying your story so far. i am very interested to see where the plot ends up. i really enjoy the harry/noncannon pairing especially fleur and daphne greengrass. and so far the story has held my attention and has me excited for more. looking forward to more updates, and possibly more from you in the future.
i have to say that i am enjoying your story so far. i am very interested to see where the plot ends up. i really enjoy the harry/noncannon pairing especially fleur and daphne greengrass. and so far the story has held my attention and has me excited for more. looking forward to more updates, and possibly more from you in the future.
7/25/2010 c2 eytedrfghjiolhg528ddfxcde
Awesome.. I am interested in this story... From what i've seen and you drop hints about harry manipulates his grades to be average.. him not agreeing with albus is also a plus.
Awesome.. I am interested in this story... From what i've seen and you drop hints about harry manipulates his grades to be average.. him not agreeing with albus is also a plus.
7/25/2010 c2 Nemo7777
I like the pace. Thank you for promising regular updates. One of my pet peeves is a good story that gets updated less and less frequently and then dies off- often just as the denoument is approaching!
I also am fond of this pairing, and you seem to be able to do it justice.
Thanks for a good beginning!
I like the pace. Thank you for promising regular updates. One of my pet peeves is a good story that gets updated less and less frequently and then dies off- often just as the denoument is approaching!
I also am fond of this pairing, and you seem to be able to do it justice.
Thanks for a good beginning!
7/25/2010 c2 TralfamadoreUndone
Nice chap..but do I see Sebastian taking a bit ruthless role with the Dursleys? Eagerly waiting for the next one...
Nice chap..but do I see Sebastian taking a bit ruthless role with the Dursleys? Eagerly waiting for the next one...
7/25/2010 c2 TNT220
From what I've read so far, the story can only disappoint if you kill of Fleur or Harry or let something bad happen to Fleur. So fra the pace is perfect, your characters spot on and the atmosphere out of this world.
I hate waiting for chapters to, but if yours have this quality they are definitely worth waiting for.
There are too few good Harry and Fleur stories, and your one is already at the top of the list quality wise and that goes for alll HP stories including JKR. The story and your writing simply have what it takes, so please continue this way.
Thanks for a great read
From what I've read so far, the story can only disappoint if you kill of Fleur or Harry or let something bad happen to Fleur. So fra the pace is perfect, your characters spot on and the atmosphere out of this world.
I hate waiting for chapters to, but if yours have this quality they are definitely worth waiting for.
There are too few good Harry and Fleur stories, and your one is already at the top of the list quality wise and that goes for alll HP stories including JKR. The story and your writing simply have what it takes, so please continue this way.
Thanks for a great read
7/25/2010 c2 3Hakkyou no Yami
ok now...I know the next chapter should VERY interesting and finally Harry would be free from those bastards...personally I hope he lives in France.
3Hakkyou no Yamiok now...I know the next chapter should VERY interesting and finally Harry would be free from those bastards...personally I hope he lives in France.
7/25/2010 c2 cjcold2
Nice start.
Seen the basic idea before bt the execution is still very well done.
Can't wait to see Harry's reaction. Both to leaving the Dursley's and about Fleur.
More soon please.
Nice start.
Seen the basic idea before bt the execution is still very well done.
Can't wait to see Harry's reaction. Both to leaving the Dursley's and about Fleur.
More soon please.
7/25/2010 c2 1S. Knightshade
My, my this does grab ones interest. i can't wait to see how you will build off this. The only thing i find confusing is your description of Fleur's father who was stated to be rather short and possessed a generous waistline himself. However, if ihis is simply because, you wanted a more intimidating figure than by all means continue on. I look forward to the rest of you work.
signed,
S. Knightshade.
1S. KnightshadeMy, my this does grab ones interest. i can't wait to see how you will build off this. The only thing i find confusing is your description of Fleur's father who was stated to be rather short and possessed a generous waistline himself. However, if ihis is simply because, you wanted a more intimidating figure than by all means continue on. I look forward to the rest of you work.
signed,
S. Knightshade.
7/25/2010 c2 Slytherin66
A good chapter I liked what was done I hope Harry's former family are dealt with and their suffering can match that of what Harry had to endure. The fact the Dursley's are muggles will cause the darker families to make a big deal of how bad muggles are.
It would be good if Mr Delacour finds out about Minerva and the part she played in Harry being placed with such nasty people, the Weasleys as well as they follow Dumbledore blindly.
What of Hermione? did she play a part in what has happened to Harry
I hope the Potter wealth can be taken back from the Headmaster and if the old man has been taking gold for the greater good I hope it can all be reclaimed with interest angry Goblins or an international incident are always good I hope Albus suffers a great deal of bad press the last thing he wants it Harry being offered a place at a new school.
Thanks for the quick update I don't mind heavily-clichéd as everything has been done in Harry Potter already but if you have a good idea or a creative was to twist something why not use it. There is few Harry/Fleur stories anyway I am pleased you have so much done I hope the story will be completed.
A good chapter I liked what was done I hope Harry's former family are dealt with and their suffering can match that of what Harry had to endure. The fact the Dursley's are muggles will cause the darker families to make a big deal of how bad muggles are.
It would be good if Mr Delacour finds out about Minerva and the part she played in Harry being placed with such nasty people, the Weasleys as well as they follow Dumbledore blindly.
What of Hermione? did she play a part in what has happened to Harry
I hope the Potter wealth can be taken back from the Headmaster and if the old man has been taking gold for the greater good I hope it can all be reclaimed with interest angry Goblins or an international incident are always good I hope Albus suffers a great deal of bad press the last thing he wants it Harry being offered a place at a new school.
Thanks for the quick update I don't mind heavily-clichéd as everything has been done in Harry Potter already but if you have a good idea or a creative was to twist something why not use it. There is few Harry/Fleur stories anyway I am pleased you have so much done I hope the story will be completed.
7/25/2010 c1 5Desertcoyote77
This is a very interesting read. I'm really looking forward to this story. I really like the fact that you look alittle deeper into Fleur's character...
5Desertcoyote77This is a very interesting read. I'm really looking forward to this story. I really like the fact that you look alittle deeper into Fleur's character...