for Champions8/31/2024 c38 maiqsmail
I'm starting to think that the only existing curse breaker in the whole magical world is Bill Weasel.
I'm starting to think that the only existing curse breaker in the whole magical world is Bill Weasel.
8/31/2024 c31 maiqsmail
Ron bashing? How is this bashing if it's all in-character and canon-compliant?
Yes, I don't like the weasel, how could you tell?
Ron bashing? How is this bashing if it's all in-character and canon-compliant?
Yes, I don't like the weasel, how could you tell?
8/30/2024 c23 maiqsmail
"written more than a decade ago" - oh, is this a rewrite? Or just brushing up?
"written more than a decade ago" - oh, is this a rewrite? Or just brushing up?
8/30/2024 c20 maiqsmail
His guardians are french. Prophet and Minister are owned by Malfoy. Hogwarts is run by Dumbles who proved to be an enemy here.
What's stopping Harry from ditching Britain and moving to France permanently?
His guardians are french. Prophet and Minister are owned by Malfoy. Hogwarts is run by Dumbles who proved to be an enemy here.
What's stopping Harry from ditching Britain and moving to France permanently?
8/30/2024 c17 maiqsmail
Kinda OOC for Molly. Yes, she's an overbearing bint in canon, but only for her own brood. We have seen a contrast when she would lay into Ronald then turn to Harry and call him "Harry, dear".
More IC for her in this situation would be to go to someone with more authority and straighten things out. Logically, that would be first Arthur, then Dumbles, with letters fired up to her in-school children to get more info meanwhile.
Kinda OOC for Molly. Yes, she's an overbearing bint in canon, but only for her own brood. We have seen a contrast when she would lay into Ronald then turn to Harry and call him "Harry, dear".
More IC for her in this situation would be to go to someone with more authority and straighten things out. Logically, that would be first Arthur, then Dumbles, with letters fired up to her in-school children to get more info meanwhile.
8/29/2024 c4 maiqsmail
I like flowerpot pairing but the way most of the stories do it is just... meh... Basically inventing fanon out of thin air to justify a highly unlikely pairing. Veela bonds, life debts, coupled time travel, MC time travel to boost his "mental" age to match her... I dunno, seems kinda reaching to me. The fact that she is only introduced at 3wt start doesn't help at all.
I really liked A Cadmean Victory, it had a more natural feeling to the pairing and its progression, even if MC had to go OOC there (basically flipped to slytherin-pragmatic side and decided to take a responsibility for his life), but that's one way to do it, I guess.
I like flowerpot pairing but the way most of the stories do it is just... meh... Basically inventing fanon out of thin air to justify a highly unlikely pairing. Veela bonds, life debts, coupled time travel, MC time travel to boost his "mental" age to match her... I dunno, seems kinda reaching to me. The fact that she is only introduced at 3wt start doesn't help at all.
I really liked A Cadmean Victory, it had a more natural feeling to the pairing and its progression, even if MC had to go OOC there (basically flipped to slytherin-pragmatic side and decided to take a responsibility for his life), but that's one way to do it, I guess.
8/27/2024 c4 Broadsky
I believe your story is being stolen on ao3 httpsarchiveofourown under the name of The Flowers Savior by IronAngel88. So far it looks like 1-1 solid copy
I believe your story is being stolen on ao3 httpsarchiveofourown under the name of The Flowers Savior by IronAngel88. So far it looks like 1-1 solid copy
8/20/2024 c48 
4ElfOwl
This has to be one of my favorite stories of all time. And that's saying something. Thank you for finishing it!
4ElfOwlThis has to be one of my favorite stories of all time. And that's saying something. Thank you for finishing it!
8/16/2024 c5 Razer Granger
i have read this book several times. i love this book. i really love the epilogue because it explains everyone
i have read this book several times. i love this book. i really love the epilogue because it explains everyone
7/30/2024 c35 skaviouz
I know this chapter (35) is an old chapter, and that the story has already been completed as there is an epilogue at chapter 48; but you mentioned Malfoy being the whims of fiction god, a moment of inspiration, but I can think up some ideals where this is a positive event for Malfoy. Just imagine, Malfoy wants to stay away from the Dark Lord, he doesn't want his son to get involved with Voldy. I am not saying that he planned to get arrested and sent to prison, but perhaps he wanted to be in the spot light and "prove" his position, so that when all is said and done in the future, he can tell the dark lord he's always set up his position and stature to be opposed to all of voldy's enemies while trying to feign his allegiance. I think that's the basis of his political career?
I know this chapter (35) is an old chapter, and that the story has already been completed as there is an epilogue at chapter 48; but you mentioned Malfoy being the whims of fiction god, a moment of inspiration, but I can think up some ideals where this is a positive event for Malfoy. Just imagine, Malfoy wants to stay away from the Dark Lord, he doesn't want his son to get involved with Voldy. I am not saying that he planned to get arrested and sent to prison, but perhaps he wanted to be in the spot light and "prove" his position, so that when all is said and done in the future, he can tell the dark lord he's always set up his position and stature to be opposed to all of voldy's enemies while trying to feign his allegiance. I think that's the basis of his political career?
7/20/2024 c5 aacortez2005
when you say you here what you write what exactly do you mean? I myself have an inner monologue and a decent imagination that lets me play out scenes in my head
when you say you here what you write what exactly do you mean? I myself have an inner monologue and a decent imagination that lets me play out scenes in my head
6/30/2024 c28 Jhn1
Typo maybe?
Missing word(s?)
Now I've got you...
Now that I've got you... is better.
You could even precede it with a bit such as "let them kill me now that I've got you."
Good luck with your muse issues
John
Typo maybe?
Missing word(s?)
Now I've got you...
Now that I've got you... is better.
You could even precede it with a bit such as "let them kill me now that I've got you."
Good luck with your muse issues
John