
4/4/2024 c6 Guest
Y does Harry needs to say evrything to Hermione and y does she needs to know everything? Does harry needs to consult with her for everything and y is so nosy? Doesn’t she undestand no personal space?
Y does Harry needs to say evrything to Hermione and y does she needs to know everything? Does harry needs to consult with her for everything and y is so nosy? Doesn’t she undestand no personal space?
3/27/2024 c6
11brigrove
I disagree with your endnote that you think Hermione would react more strongly to Harry being forced into marriage. I think you got it just right in the story. She would know that an over the top reaction would make it much harder on Harry.

I disagree with your endnote that you think Hermione would react more strongly to Harry being forced into marriage. I think you got it just right in the story. She would know that an over the top reaction would make it much harder on Harry.
3/22/2024 c48 Irene
Thank you for finishing this interesting story. I'd never read a Harry/Fleur romance before this.
It's not my One True Pairing, (my daughter taught me that term) because I am a Harry/Hermione fan. But this had a lot of original ideas, and I enjoyed it. It's fun to see a new take on the Wizarding World. Thanks for sharing your vision with us.
Thank you for finishing this interesting story. I'd never read a Harry/Fleur romance before this.
It's not my One True Pairing, (my daughter taught me that term) because I am a Harry/Hermione fan. But this had a lot of original ideas, and I enjoyed it. It's fun to see a new take on the Wizarding World. Thanks for sharing your vision with us.
3/21/2024 c42 Guest
Lol. The idiots who thought the tournament was a good idea would be capable of using poor safety measures around dangerous beasts.
Lol. The idiots who thought the tournament was a good idea would be capable of using poor safety measures around dangerous beasts.
3/21/2024 c42 Irene
Hooray for the Champions!
Hooray for the Champions!
3/21/2024 c41 Irene
I feel sorry for Molly. I think she meant well. I'm one of those very motherly types, myself. I don't defend the howlers, in the books or in this story, but in this chapter, I do feel sorry for her.
I feel sorry for Molly. I think she meant well. I'm one of those very motherly types, myself. I don't defend the howlers, in the books or in this story, but in this chapter, I do feel sorry for her.
3/20/2024 c37 Irene
I like seeing the 4 champions interact, especially in a friendly way. Looking forward to the unfolding of their plan.
I like seeing the 4 champions interact, especially in a friendly way. Looking forward to the unfolding of their plan.
3/20/2024 c33 Irene
Crappies are fish. I have some, from a local lake, in my freezer. But it's pronounced "croppy," not "crappy.". I like to think your computer is doing its best to reward you with a fine dinner.
Crappies are fish. I have some, from a local lake, in my freezer. But it's pronounced "croppy," not "crappy.". I like to think your computer is doing its best to reward you with a fine dinner.
3/19/2024 c15 Irene
I like Hermione and Fleur being friends. Very good, beneficial to both of them.
I like Hermione and Fleur being friends. Very good, beneficial to both of them.
3/19/2024 c9 Irene
Excellent use of the pensieve.
I don't mind JKR's use of traditional themes of children's literature. An orphaned or abused child, for instance, is not treated the same in children's lit as in adult books. Adult stories show the abused character as learning to deal with his childhood trauma, or as permanently crippled by it. Children's lit uses being orphaned or abused as a plot device. They have to get rid of that living family in order to throw the protagonist into mortal danger. But they don't want to deal with actual mental difficulties caused by abuse. It's a story for kids, so the rules are different. Things are often played for laughs, like Neville being dropped out of a window, that would never be considered funny in real life.
But fanfiction is mostly read by adults.
Thank you for sharing this.
Excellent use of the pensieve.
I don't mind JKR's use of traditional themes of children's literature. An orphaned or abused child, for instance, is not treated the same in children's lit as in adult books. Adult stories show the abused character as learning to deal with his childhood trauma, or as permanently crippled by it. Children's lit uses being orphaned or abused as a plot device. They have to get rid of that living family in order to throw the protagonist into mortal danger. But they don't want to deal with actual mental difficulties caused by abuse. It's a story for kids, so the rules are different. Things are often played for laughs, like Neville being dropped out of a window, that would never be considered funny in real life.
But fanfiction is mostly read by adults.
Thank you for sharing this.
3/19/2024 c6 Irene
Personally, I always want to see Harry/Hermione. But since that's not happening, I don't want to see some Tristan/Yseult tragedy. I like Hermione being knowledgeable and also wise and nature. Ron, well, he is jealous by nature. No argument from me on that
Personally, I always want to see Harry/Hermione. But since that's not happening, I don't want to see some Tristan/Yseult tragedy. I like Hermione being knowledgeable and also wise and nature. Ron, well, he is jealous by nature. No argument from me on that
3/18/2024 c2 Irene
I really like Sebastian. No nonsense, no tolerance for evil.
I really like Sebastian. No nonsense, no tolerance for evil.
3/17/2024 c48 Crossxx
I love this story so much it is my favourite Harry x Fleur story, I was so happy to see it finished when I came back to read it again, thank you so much for such fantastic work.
I love this story so much it is my favourite Harry x Fleur story, I was so happy to see it finished when I came back to read it again, thank you so much for such fantastic work.