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2/19/2018 c1 TheFishKing
so Dr. Fate a magic god cain't beat Snape?
1/27/2018 c5 James Birdsong
Nice five chapters
10/12/2012 c5 58Zucht
I want to like this story, you are imaginative, but...

...your descriptions are sub-juvenile.

...your dialoge seems to come from the same character; Harry shouldn't read like Hermione, or Ron, or Batman, or Joker, or Snape.

Your action needs more, and varied, descriptions.
9/7/2011 c5 5angel61991
lol that was funny. but it would have been better if it was longer.
8/12/2010 c4 10ultima-owner
Joker is a sad psycho
8/9/2010 c3 ultima-owner
Kids driving= bad idea
8/1/2010 c2 ultima-owner
Great way to lose someone
8/1/2010 c1 ultima-owner
He pwned them

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