for Chain Reaction4/9 c33 
1Beans827
Wow, great great story! Loved your take on their story. And I particularly loved Bella's snark and how she got Edward to lighten up. Your version of them was really awesome and how I wish S Meyer had written them. Very well done and way to complete it after so many years! That’s true dedication. Thanks so much for sharing this story. I really enjoyed it!
1Beans827Wow, great great story! Loved your take on their story. And I particularly loved Bella's snark and how she got Edward to lighten up. Your version of them was really awesome and how I wish S Meyer had written them. Very well done and way to complete it after so many years! That’s true dedication. Thanks so much for sharing this story. I really enjoyed it!
2/19 c12 Anda
This is an interesting twist from canon, a Bella who’s angry about becoming a vampire and an Edward who doesn’t spend all his time apologising. Well done.
This is an interesting twist from canon, a Bella who’s angry about becoming a vampire and an Edward who doesn’t spend all his time apologising. Well done.
2/18 c10 Anda
Uh, I expected Bella getting into difficulties but this is a lot worse than I imagined.
Uh, I expected Bella getting into difficulties but this is a lot worse than I imagined.
2/18 c9 Anda
The reason behind Edward’s departure from the family is kind of disappointing. The family must be very much OCC if they did that.
The reason behind Edward’s departure from the family is kind of disappointing. The family must be very much OCC if they did that.
2/17 c7 Anda
Oh so sexy…
Oh so sexy…
2/17 c6 Anda
I love the’chat’ in the car.
I love the’chat’ in the car.
2/16 c5 Anda
Edward is perfect.
Edward is perfect.
2/16 c4 Anda
I love the conversations between Alice and Bella.
I love the conversations between Alice and Bella.
2/16 c3 Anda
Wow. Smoking hot…
Wow. Smoking hot…
7/11/2023 c3 TheStrangeNessie
Wow this Bella is incredibly unlikable. She steals someone's dog and then threatens to have the guy arrested? Please tell me women don't actually think like this. This is insane.
Wow this Bella is incredibly unlikable. She steals someone's dog and then threatens to have the guy arrested? Please tell me women don't actually think like this. This is insane.
7/9/2023 c33 hellishrose
So glad I stumbled upon this story after several years I do hope you still receive reviews for it. Absolutely beautiful story and amazing writing Thank you for all your hard work and dedication to this piece.
So glad I stumbled upon this story after several years I do hope you still receive reviews for it. Absolutely beautiful story and amazing writing Thank you for all your hard work and dedication to this piece.
7/6/2023 c1 BellaMendes
I loved everything about this story. The banter, the dynamic, the relationship itself was perfect. the 2 of them against the world were incredibly satisfying.. I enjoyed this Alice too bec she is canon Alice on steroids. I loved how this Edward has very little self-loathing and no regrets about changing Bella, and this bella is more mature and realistic and actually takes the time to mourn her human life.
I also loved the way they couldn't keep their hands off each other, and Edward’s habit of pinning Bella to every surface was incredibly hot..
This is way better than what we got in canon, and I can't believe I didn't find this gem sooner. I'll be coming back to re read it again and again. kudos
I loved everything about this story. The banter, the dynamic, the relationship itself was perfect. the 2 of them against the world were incredibly satisfying.. I enjoyed this Alice too bec she is canon Alice on steroids. I loved how this Edward has very little self-loathing and no regrets about changing Bella, and this bella is more mature and realistic and actually takes the time to mourn her human life.
I also loved the way they couldn't keep their hands off each other, and Edward’s habit of pinning Bella to every surface was incredibly hot..
This is way better than what we got in canon, and I can't believe I didn't find this gem sooner. I'll be coming back to re read it again and again. kudos
6/12/2023 c33 5Janelle132
Great story! It's great to read a story where Bella struggles with vampirism. She got it very easy in canon and in most fan fics she adapts really easily, so it's nice to see her be more of a typical newborn. Thanks for sharing
5Janelle132Great story! It's great to read a story where Bella struggles with vampirism. She got it very easy in canon and in most fan fics she adapts really easily, so it's nice to see her be more of a typical newborn. Thanks for sharing