for Something Short of Tragedy1/4/2011 c1 
6texaskid13
depressing but good. Nothing like the funerals I've been to, but who knows. This is bringing back memories but isn't that what a story is about? Something to relate to.
6texaskid13depressing but good. Nothing like the funerals I've been to, but who knows. This is bringing back memories but isn't that what a story is about? Something to relate to.
11/11/2010 c1 2randomzchicka
This is absuloty postively the most original creative Percy Jackson stories I have ever read. I have NEVER EVER read anything like this b4. I like it. This was well written and good grammer and such. Everyone thought that Percy Jackson would always die a hero or some noble death. Who knew he could die for something so pathetic. Good story...
2randomzchickaThis is absuloty postively the most original creative Percy Jackson stories I have ever read. I have NEVER EVER read anything like this b4. I like it. This was well written and good grammer and such. Everyone thought that Percy Jackson would always die a hero or some noble death. Who knew he could die for something so pathetic. Good story...
11/6/2010 c1 flying in the rain
Brilliant.
Honestly, I have no other words to say.
Well, actually, I do: "A few moments of uncomfortable silence passed before Travis spoke up, "So how has everyone been.""
Should there not be a question mark?
Besides that, I really, really enjoyed this. The way you wrote it astounded me. The beginning was virtualy flawless, as it brought us into the mood of the story, and you didn't go too long for a narration...
I liked how you finished it. I'm not going to say that I can't see this happening to Percy, because at the end, when Annabeth did her thing, you explained it in the way that made me believe it.
I loved it.
`Irish
Brilliant.
Honestly, I have no other words to say.
Well, actually, I do: "A few moments of uncomfortable silence passed before Travis spoke up, "So how has everyone been.""
Should there not be a question mark?
Besides that, I really, really enjoyed this. The way you wrote it astounded me. The beginning was virtualy flawless, as it brought us into the mood of the story, and you didn't go too long for a narration...
I liked how you finished it. I'm not going to say that I can't see this happening to Percy, because at the end, when Annabeth did her thing, you explained it in the way that made me believe it.
I loved it.
`Irish
10/2/2010 c1 26we're all squares here
I still wonder why I haven’t reviewed any of your fics yet. Silly, silly Andy. :P
It was wonderful and poetic and you captured the emotion perfectly.
Good job, Bianca. I loved it.
- Audreacity
26we're all squares hereI still wonder why I haven’t reviewed any of your fics yet. Silly, silly Andy. :P
It was wonderful and poetic and you captured the emotion perfectly.
Good job, Bianca. I loved it.
- Audreacity
7/27/2010 c1 1TheNineMuses
This was quite a piece,in many ways. Keeping the reader slightly in the shadows as in to who's death it was was a nice techinque. Something Short of Tragedy is an excellent and well-fitted title to this story. Something all titles should be. The summary and the piece itself, overall are very thought provoking. The characters are in character,which is nice. Especially Annabeth. This was an interesting ending to Percy's life. It's not like a fairytale,which provides a more realistic environment for the reader. This oneshot displayed the changes that occured in Percy's life, Annabeth's guilt,and even Nico's jealousy. Overall,I did enjoy this.
1TheNineMusesThis was quite a piece,in many ways. Keeping the reader slightly in the shadows as in to who's death it was was a nice techinque. Something Short of Tragedy is an excellent and well-fitted title to this story. Something all titles should be. The summary and the piece itself, overall are very thought provoking. The characters are in character,which is nice. Especially Annabeth. This was an interesting ending to Percy's life. It's not like a fairytale,which provides a more realistic environment for the reader. This oneshot displayed the changes that occured in Percy's life, Annabeth's guilt,and even Nico's jealousy. Overall,I did enjoy this.
7/27/2010 c1 4hp-not harry potter
I LOVED this. Absolutely loved it. Not only because it's the sort of sad ending stories my creepy-self likes, but rather because of its quality. Leaving us in the shadows about who the deceased was till the middle was rather brilliant,making sure that none of the characters cared for him anymore, since he died long before actually being stabbed. Genius.
Always a fan,
Hp
4hp-not harry potterI LOVED this. Absolutely loved it. Not only because it's the sort of sad ending stories my creepy-self likes, but rather because of its quality. Leaving us in the shadows about who the deceased was till the middle was rather brilliant,making sure that none of the characters cared for him anymore, since he died long before actually being stabbed. Genius.
Always a fan,
Hp
7/27/2010 c1 2Karma's Inferno
I have not been that close to tears in a REALLY long time. *hugs* I loved it. Everyone was in character and it was just... beautiful.
2Karma's InfernoI have not been that close to tears in a REALLY long time. *hugs* I loved it. Everyone was in character and it was just... beautiful.
7/27/2010 c1 Ariadne's Twine
*claps*
I really liked this. Nice grammar, nice spelling.
Overall? 9/10.
Thanks, much.
~Rachel.
*claps*
I really liked this. Nice grammar, nice spelling.
Overall? 9/10.
Thanks, much.
~Rachel.