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1/9 c1 1BanzEye
Eh, I thought it was ok. It’s not the greatest crossover I’ve ever read, but it has potential! Well, hope to seethe next chapter soon. Write later!
9/2/2013 c1 Shadowprice
this is good you should make more
12/23/2011 c1 Super Saiyan God Gogeta
Will Naruto turn to the Darkside. Like Anakin did.
6/1/2011 c1 36LeakySneakyOprichniki
Haha, what an interesting cross over. Over all it looks pretty good. Some name misspellings and some tense agreement stuff but that's about it.

Nice job my friend.

Naruto with a light-saber? Now, that would be an interesting sight.
11/25/2010 c1 Foolish Mortal 101
Very nice.

Plz continue.
11/9/2010 c1 17Kage Bijuu
This is a very Epic start of a story you know that and also one question is Hinata going to be a Near Human race do to her eyes?
11/8/2010 c1 3Lowbacca's Roar
A few misspellings, but all in all, very good. As for the misspellings, here are the corrections: "Inuzaki" should be "Inuzuka" and "Jarayia" (or however you decided to spell his name) should be "Jiraiya".

Keep up the good work!

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