
1/1/2011 c4
7Sofie Clearwater
Great! I love it! I may sound like a hypocrit, I know my stories have awful grammer, but I beg you, I beg anybody with bad grammer, have someone check it before you post! Please! I'm not flaming I swear. I hate rude people, and I try to be polite, but I'm asking please! Thank you. Thank you!
I'm sorry to sound soo rude!

Great! I love it! I may sound like a hypocrit, I know my stories have awful grammer, but I beg you, I beg anybody with bad grammer, have someone check it before you post! Please! I'm not flaming I swear. I hate rude people, and I try to be polite, but I'm asking please! Thank you. Thank you!
I'm sorry to sound soo rude!
11/27/2010 c4 DareBare13
I feel so bad for Callie :( Update soon! I hope she keeps custody of her sister
I feel so bad for Callie :( Update soon! I hope she keeps custody of her sister
9/23/2010 c3
5rainydaysaremyheaven
I just found your story.
Its brilliant, keep writing your really good :)
Update soon,
Love Always,
Laura

I just found your story.
Its brilliant, keep writing your really good :)
Update soon,
Love Always,
Laura
8/26/2010 c3 DareBare13
Smile by Charlie Chaplin is one of my FAVORITE SONGS! Poor Callie, she caught him at the wrong moment... Update soon please :)
Smile by Charlie Chaplin is one of my FAVORITE SONGS! Poor Callie, she caught him at the wrong moment... Update soon please :)
8/25/2010 c3
1happinie93
Awesome chapter! You know it always looks bad from someone else's point of view, because they don't know the whole story. Anyway can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update again soon!

Awesome chapter! You know it always looks bad from someone else's point of view, because they don't know the whole story. Anyway can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update again soon!
8/9/2010 c2
4jcecb
u ruined the hole eliza thing with maya :(
o well i like it cause its so good!
-Eliza

u ruined the hole eliza thing with maya :(
o well i like it cause its so good!
-Eliza
8/6/2010 c1 Eliza Jane Black
man June should have thrown her shoes into the water! tht would hav been funny!
-Eliza
man June should have thrown her shoes into the water! tht would hav been funny!
-Eliza
7/31/2010 c2
1happinie93
Awesome Brady imprint story! So far I haven't read any Brady imprint stories that had really caught my interest. So I hope that you'll be able to update again soon!

Awesome Brady imprint story! So far I haven't read any Brady imprint stories that had really caught my interest. So I hope that you'll be able to update again soon!
7/27/2010 c1
38writergal24
i really like the first chapter! it seems like a really good idea.
one thing that i'm confused about is Callie's relationship to June and the other girls. Are they just friends? Are they the same age?
Write more soon!
~writergal24

i really like the first chapter! it seems like a really good idea.
one thing that i'm confused about is Callie's relationship to June and the other girls. Are they just friends? Are they the same age?
Write more soon!
~writergal24