for Lost Battle10/13/2014 c1 all-audrey
Haha I love it 3
Keep the good work going, we (the fandom) really need more writers like you in those desperate times...
Haha I love it 3
Keep the good work going, we (the fandom) really need more writers like you in those desperate times...
5/9/2014 c1 The Spanner
One thousand words minimum for a decent one-shot?
My arse.
Also, you spell "too" in the case of "too much" or "too little" with two 'o's, as demonstrated.
Don't troll, you archaic douche.
The Spanner Team
xoxo
One thousand words minimum for a decent one-shot?
My arse.
Also, you spell "too" in the case of "too much" or "too little" with two 'o's, as demonstrated.
Don't troll, you archaic douche.
The Spanner Team
xoxo
1/27/2012 c1 STALKERS
Uhh... I'm confused. Sorry if I seem dense... I'm just a major blonde.
Uhh... I'm confused. Sorry if I seem dense... I'm just a major blonde.
11/3/2010 c1 
15camillexelisabeth
Oh thank the gods that there are at least a few sane people left in this fandom. Great one-shot, despite the length.
ψcamille elisabethψ
15camillexelisabethOh thank the gods that there are at least a few sane people left in this fandom. Great one-shot, despite the length.
ψcamille elisabethψ
10/20/2010 c1 Lol
What you need: *required
*a brain
*a beta
*a life
Expect you can't get a brain. You don't have a life. Not even the best beta reader could save this piece of sh*t so delete. Give your account to somebody with talent.
What you need: *required
*a brain
*a beta
*a life
Expect you can't get a brain. You don't have a life. Not even the best beta reader could save this piece of sh*t so delete. Give your account to somebody with talent.
9/23/2010 c1 Lieutenant Of Artemis
Ooh, I like this :D It's short, but okay for a one-shot/drabble. By the way, I believe I've seen you on the Veritaville forum. Nice to meet you.
Once again, great job.
-Lieutenant of Artemis
Ooh, I like this :D It's short, but okay for a one-shot/drabble. By the way, I believe I've seen you on the Veritaville forum. Nice to meet you.
Once again, great job.
-Lieutenant of Artemis
9/9/2010 c1 2Harmonian Zutarian
Percy Jackson is simple not abul to run fast enough! He stops and get eaten by the zombies! Oh my! RedBootton zombie hordes!
2Harmonian ZutarianPercy Jackson is simple not abul to run fast enough! He stops and get eaten by the zombies! Oh my! RedBootton zombie hordes!
8/30/2010 c1 4Infinity Blues
Ooh, me likesies! But I think you should something about how the
Veritas have evolved for the better, and that little village is Veritaville.
Other than those two suggestions, it was flawless, really1 Funny, and cleverly done. A little bit on the sort side though.
4Infinity BluesOoh, me likesies! But I think you should something about how the
Veritas have evolved for the better, and that little village is Veritaville.
Other than those two suggestions, it was flawless, really1 Funny, and cleverly done. A little bit on the sort side though.
8/20/2010 c1 2YearOfDreams
I like it. The concept is awesome. I dunno how you come up with this stuff but it's really interesting.
I did see a missing comma, though, and a few things could have been worded slightly different for better flow. Oh. And you forgot to add the extra 'o' to 'too' in your AN. No big deal. Just minor things I happened to spot.
Anyway, back to the concept. I love it. It seems as if you've taken your view on the PJO fandom and magnified it into something more significant.
Well written, enjoyable drabble.
YearOfDreams_
2YearOfDreamsI like it. The concept is awesome. I dunno how you come up with this stuff but it's really interesting.
I did see a missing comma, though, and a few things could have been worded slightly different for better flow. Oh. And you forgot to add the extra 'o' to 'too' in your AN. No big deal. Just minor things I happened to spot.
Anyway, back to the concept. I love it. It seems as if you've taken your view on the PJO fandom and magnified it into something more significant.
Well written, enjoyable drabble.
YearOfDreams_
8/18/2010 c1 goooooodgrl
1000 words is the minimum what are you thinking
such a short chapter 1 oh no looks like this storys gonna flop
what sort of begging faster what faster
1000 words is the minimum what are you thinking
such a short chapter 1 oh no looks like this storys gonna flop
what sort of begging faster what faster
8/16/2010 c1 10The Midnight Doe
Ooh I like. :) Good job, Critic. The only critism is that it's a leetle too short for my taste. Other than that, good job(:
~Tay
10The Midnight DoeOoh I like. :) Good job, Critic. The only critism is that it's a leetle too short for my taste. Other than that, good job(:
~Tay
8/16/2010 c1 Ariadne's Twine
Wowz, this is great, Brownie. I really loved it. But I do think there could have been more description and the ending was... Off.
Grammar and spelling: Vonderful.
7/10.
Thanks, much.
~Rachel.
Wowz, this is great, Brownie. I really loved it. But I do think there could have been more description and the ending was... Off.
Grammar and spelling: Vonderful.
7/10.
Thanks, much.
~Rachel.