for Lost Battle8/2/2010 c1 Emmafer
I don't really have any criticism to give you on this piece, but it does describe the fandom how I imagine it. An entertaining fic. :D
~Emmafer
I don't really have any criticism to give you on this piece, but it does describe the fandom how I imagine it. An entertaining fic. :D
~Emmafer
7/30/2010 c1 
20koalakoala
...I hadn't noticed that you finally posted something.
But anyway...I'd say this was good and well-written, but kind of pointless. It really has nothing to do with PJO at all, which is essentially what FF is for. I think your time would be better spent on writing a fic that's actually about the series itself, but that's my opinion.
Though, despite that, you did a good job with this.
20koalakoala...I hadn't noticed that you finally posted something.
But anyway...I'd say this was good and well-written, but kind of pointless. It really has nothing to do with PJO at all, which is essentially what FF is for. I think your time would be better spent on writing a fic that's actually about the series itself, but that's my opinion.
Though, despite that, you did a good job with this.
7/28/2010 c1 You Know Who
Nice job Critic. It was fast-paced, though a bit sort. I enjoyed the mood, it was grim with bits of hope. Hope the rest would be just as good.
Nice job Critic. It was fast-paced, though a bit sort. I enjoyed the mood, it was grim with bits of hope. Hope the rest would be just as good.
7/28/2010 c1 4insert meaningful phrase here
Dun dun dun dun.
Short. But that's okay.
I'm stuck thinking of things to say.
4insert meaningful phrase hereDun dun dun dun.
Short. But that's okay.
I'm stuck thinking of things to say.
7/27/2010 c1 blaviken
The state of the PJO fandom and its stories is well reflected in this historical narrative, encouraging people to keep fighting.
Overall: 9.0/10
The state of the PJO fandom and its stories is well reflected in this historical narrative, encouraging people to keep fighting.
Overall: 9.0/10
7/27/2010 c1 2Karma's Inferno
It was interesting, fun to read, and suspensful albeit being just a smidgen short.
2Karma's InfernoIt was interesting, fun to read, and suspensful albeit being just a smidgen short.
7/27/2010 c1 1SharpenedPencil
First review :)
Critic-
This is good. It's quite realistic to the real world. You seem to enjoy writing about FanFiction's turmoil, yes?
Anyway, I think this is well written for the most part. Great job :)
~Pencil
1SharpenedPencilFirst review :)
Critic-
This is good. It's quite realistic to the real world. You seem to enjoy writing about FanFiction's turmoil, yes?
Anyway, I think this is well written for the most part. Great job :)
~Pencil