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7/29/2010 c1 22Delia Lavender
That was stunning...and very different. I really enjoyed it.

I was so engrossed with the finale that it never occurred to me to wonder if Kate remembered Jacob. And the twist with "Samuel" and Richard was awfully amusing. Wouldn't it have been funny if Kate had recognized Samuel in Flocke?
7/28/2010 c1 a0woeijtpasdijpaosirjgtm
Hm. Wow, again. I really liked how you got in Kate's head, her teenage crush on Jacob was well-done, and how she meets-but-doesn't-meet the Man in Black. And how in the end Richard ties everything together, bridges all those gaps of time, fantasy, emotion. I have to say, when he tells her about Jacob and the Man in Black, and she laughs, I smiled, too-our lives are so inextricably bound to everyone we meet, I suppose. I guess it had some personal resonance.

Anyways, I don't know how many of these you plan to write-if it is planned-but I look forward to more, if more are to come. :)

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