
12/19/2011 c1
19fruitwhirl
Annabeth seemed a little OOC, but in a way that it was okay. And this story was pretty original, kind of quirky, but I liked it. I hope you keep writing.!(:

Annabeth seemed a little OOC, but in a way that it was okay. And this story was pretty original, kind of quirky, but I liked it. I hope you keep writing.!(:
8/29/2010 c1
15Abigail Thalia La Rue
i love cheesy romance, people thought the first chapter of my story was cheesy. i love your writing.
Love,
Abigail Rosalie Black

i love cheesy romance, people thought the first chapter of my story was cheesy. i love your writing.
Love,
Abigail Rosalie Black
8/11/2010 c1
4lyrically-correct
i can imagine that happening actually its believable because of the whole kneeing him in the back thing which bad guys do anyways so you did a really good job and i love cheecy fluffy percabeth moments. great job!
L-C

i can imagine that happening actually its believable because of the whole kneeing him in the back thing which bad guys do anyways so you did a really good job and i love cheecy fluffy percabeth moments. great job!
L-C
7/29/2010 c1 Brianna
Aww cute I love the percabeth parts. The other parts were umm... Interesting. A phycho killer ... Wow kinda makes me wonder wat goes on in your mind hahaha jk. Good job writing this story
Aww cute I love the percabeth parts. The other parts were umm... Interesting. A phycho killer ... Wow kinda makes me wonder wat goes on in your mind hahaha jk. Good job writing this story
7/29/2010 c1 Tommie
That was great I liked it write another one-shot please after you finishe your next chapter in percy Jackson and the dissipating mist
That was great I liked it write another one-shot please after you finishe your next chapter in percy Jackson and the dissipating mist