for Gathering the Scattered Pieces: Laughter8/23/2010 c4 
41Authoressinhiding
I knew there was a dolphin somewhere! Yay Dolphin! -AiH does happy-dolphin dance- Enjoy your vacation!
41AuthoressinhidingI knew there was a dolphin somewhere! Yay Dolphin! -AiH does happy-dolphin dance- Enjoy your vacation!
8/22/2010 c4 31foreverkneeld
Hah, hah! Love the drunken sailor song. We have another verse of that - "Throw him in the bilge and make him drink it," etc, as well as "Throw him overboard and let the sharkies have him!"
We're a bit...strange. :) But it's all good.
Great chapter!
Eavis
31foreverkneeldHah, hah! Love the drunken sailor song. We have another verse of that - "Throw him in the bilge and make him drink it," etc, as well as "Throw him overboard and let the sharkies have him!"
We're a bit...strange. :) But it's all good.
Great chapter!
Eavis
8/15/2010 c3 41Authoressinhiding
Okay, well, we almost had dolphins. I guess merpeople is close enough. Update soon?
41AuthoressinhidingOkay, well, we almost had dolphins. I guess merpeople is close enough. Update soon?
8/7/2010 c2 31foreverkneeld
Doodness! What sobriety indeed! Wondering, though, what was her resolve that nearly failed? Did I miss something?
Good chapter!
Eavis
31foreverkneeldDoodness! What sobriety indeed! Wondering, though, what was her resolve that nearly failed? Did I miss something?
Good chapter!
Eavis
7/30/2010 c1 foreverkneeld
Hm...It looks good to me, but as I've never experienced Kingdom Hearts, I wouldn't really know. Good job with the Ames/James interaction. Oh, and regarding your answer to my review...thanks. I suppose I can understand where you're coming from, ("Each according to the dictates of his own conscience" and all that) though, as a personal favor, since I lean towards the hardly-using-any-exclamations-side, could you perhaps, in the future, substitute a euphemism instead?
God be with you,
Eavis
Hm...It looks good to me, but as I've never experienced Kingdom Hearts, I wouldn't really know. Good job with the Ames/James interaction. Oh, and regarding your answer to my review...thanks. I suppose I can understand where you're coming from, ("Each according to the dictates of his own conscience" and all that) though, as a personal favor, since I lean towards the hardly-using-any-exclamations-side, could you perhaps, in the future, substitute a euphemism instead?
God be with you,
Eavis