for Forever in flux12/26/2011 c3 
7Riddle Wraith
Damn, that sucks. I hope you don't give up. This is good so far. I hope to see more soon.
7Riddle WraithDamn, that sucks. I hope you don't give up. This is good so far. I hope to see more soon.
1/13/2011 c2 3WhiteElfElder
Yep, Harry is still the ever rushing fool that goes where Angels fear to tread.
3WhiteElfElderYep, Harry is still the ever rushing fool that goes where Angels fear to tread.
9/14/2010 c2 1MarieVerdonck
Nice story, seems quite original so far :) The writing style is very agreeable and I can't remember any faults (which could mean there were a few minor ones, but I just don't remember, so it matters little^^)... I look forward to reading more so please update soon!
Athena
1MarieVerdonckNice story, seems quite original so far :) The writing style is very agreeable and I can't remember any faults (which could mean there were a few minor ones, but I just don't remember, so it matters little^^)... I look forward to reading more so please update soon!
Athena
8/19/2010 c2 4i say hello
Awesome! Hope you update soon i cant wait to see more! Is the doctor going to be in it? I hope so... :)
Update soon!
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4i say helloAwesome! Hope you update soon i cant wait to see more! Is the doctor going to be in it? I hope so... :)
Update soon!
xx
8/1/2010 c1 1dragonDraw
wow i cant wait for more this certainly atarted out very interesting and has made me excited about what happens next.
1dragonDrawwow i cant wait for more this certainly atarted out very interesting and has made me excited about what happens next.
8/1/2010 c1 souless heartless page
would you mean apparated?
would you mean apparated?
7/30/2010 c1 11Acheron Blake
Interesting beginning but why did you de-age him and really? Well, points for originality. You need a beta to correct your spelling and grammar issues, for starters. i would be glad to help you. I love HP and Doctor Who and live for good crossover fics, which I'm sure this could become with a little polishing.
11Acheron BlakeInteresting beginning but why did you de-age him and really? Well, points for originality. You need a beta to correct your spelling and grammar issues, for starters. i would be glad to help you. I love HP and Doctor Who and live for good crossover fics, which I'm sure this could become with a little polishing.