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7/12/2011 c1 2Sentio Infermum
This was awesome! Mrs. Benson is a character that the ICarly writers never took the time to make excuses for. It's important that people like you step up and give us the reasons why...

The one suggestion I have is that you take away the last sentence. It kind of takes away from the overall mood, what with the cloud block and such.

But it is a great stuff.
8/2/2010 c1 8AquaLovesYou
I think it was fine (:

I liked it, it's short but it expresses Marissa's feelings well and we get an explanation of why she protects Freddie so much. And it is so not stupid! xD

Thanks for a really good story; and sorry, just in case you find some hints of bad grammar. :P

~Bye

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