4/27/2015 c1 Waffleuser
I've never read anything including Bleach so beautiful.
I've never read anything including Bleach so beautiful.
2/3/2013 c1 2Lelouch-Akagami
nice Fanfic I like Ulquihime and hate IchiRuki xD but woo Arrancar and Human...amazing I dont think if Orihime was pregnant *-*/
nice Fanfic I like Ulquihime and hate IchiRuki xD but woo Arrancar and Human...amazing I dont think if Orihime was pregnant *-*/
7/19/2012 c1 2Belit.Lihara
I loved your story, the truth is that once I had read a while ago and then could not find it, but anyway I remembered some of it and inspired me at times with my drawings (although right now no where to store my drawings ...), but perhaps reuse it for later. Thank you for this little story. ;)
I loved your story, the truth is that once I had read a while ago and then could not find it, but anyway I remembered some of it and inspired me at times with my drawings (although right now no where to store my drawings ...), but perhaps reuse it for later. Thank you for this little story. ;)
8/3/2011 c1 2Independent Not in Love
This was amazing! So... I don't know it just seems to fit the story right, and it feels like the actual writer of the series made this :) Nice job
This was amazing! So... I don't know it just seems to fit the story right, and it feels like the actual writer of the series made this :) Nice job
3/3/2011 c1 8ResplendentQuetzal
One of the better one shots out there. Nice writing and you really captured the characters well. Kawaii :3
One of the better one shots out there. Nice writing and you really captured the characters well. Kawaii :3
8/28/2010 c1 8Kaykat
Nice one-shot, one of the better I have read! You portrayed them to the point, an amazing job I must say!
O_x
Nice one-shot, one of the better I have read! You portrayed them to the point, an amazing job I must say!
O_x
8/16/2010 c1 6Littleredridingwho
This was a lovely oneshot!really really good!it wasn't overly explicit or lemony which often can ruin a story.
instead I was able to enjoy the emotions and views of the characters!
I particularly loved the line:
'' He'd hurt her. The thought repeated countless times in his head and he became hard-pressed to remind himself that at least this bit of pain was necessary.''
A realy beautiful sentence that reflected Ulquiorra's conflicting emotions.
Thanx for the one shot!Well done!xlolx
This was a lovely oneshot!really really good!it wasn't overly explicit or lemony which often can ruin a story.
instead I was able to enjoy the emotions and views of the characters!
I particularly loved the line:
'' He'd hurt her. The thought repeated countless times in his head and he became hard-pressed to remind himself that at least this bit of pain was necessary.''
A realy beautiful sentence that reflected Ulquiorra's conflicting emotions.
Thanx for the one shot!Well done!xlolx
7/31/2010 c1 2Scarlet-Rain
This once shot was a bit dull, you should look it over, there are some mistakes. This is a one-shot, right? Haha you forgot to mark it complete, I've done this before lol.
I'd like to see more one-shots from you! Keep writing!
This once shot was a bit dull, you should look it over, there are some mistakes. This is a one-shot, right? Haha you forgot to mark it complete, I've done this before lol.
I'd like to see more one-shots from you! Keep writing!
7/30/2010 c1 6Phantom105
*pokes head above desktop* ah yes...*shifty eyes* FIRST REVIEW D Truely one of the better oneshots out there, very nicely written. I have to say i was a bit confused at first when it shifted back to a memory, maybe italics would have helped a bit there. Other than that and a few little spelling things, absolutely awesome :D More oneshots? PLEASE! Keep it up definitely, you have a talent.
Cheers,
Phantom
*pokes head above desktop* ah yes...*shifty eyes* FIRST REVIEW D Truely one of the better oneshots out there, very nicely written. I have to say i was a bit confused at first when it shifted back to a memory, maybe italics would have helped a bit there. Other than that and a few little spelling things, absolutely awesome :D More oneshots? PLEASE! Keep it up definitely, you have a talent.
Cheers,
Phantom