for These Unstable Projections1/12/2012 c8 
2Satyra J
oh wow I really love this. Its so wonderful, the style you wrote in matches the feel of the movie and the plot is fantastic. So very unique, I've read tons of fics of Cobb losing it after the inception job but none of Ariadne. I just really love this story!
2Satyra Joh wow I really love this. Its so wonderful, the style you wrote in matches the feel of the movie and the plot is fantastic. So very unique, I've read tons of fics of Cobb losing it after the inception job but none of Ariadne. I just really love this story!
8/24/2010 c7 JenCarpeDiem
I'm really intrigued - I just can't tell where this is going to go. Beautifully written. :)
I'm really intrigued - I just can't tell where this is going to go. Beautifully written. :)
8/20/2010 c7 1BlueberryOcean
I love the flow that you have between each chapter. You can really see how Ariadne is devolving as time goes on.
1BlueberryOceanI love the flow that you have between each chapter. You can really see how Ariadne is devolving as time goes on.
8/17/2010 c7 Weevees
Hey I love your story. It's got such a feeling of melancholy about it that I'm always felt feeling a bit sad after reading it. You've constructed Ariadne's character wonderfully; especially her struggle with normalcy. The only thing that I wish it had was a bit of romance, but that's due to the romantic in me.
I hope you continue with this story, and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
Hey I love your story. It's got such a feeling of melancholy about it that I'm always felt feeling a bit sad after reading it. You've constructed Ariadne's character wonderfully; especially her struggle with normalcy. The only thing that I wish it had was a bit of romance, but that's due to the romantic in me.
I hope you continue with this story, and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
8/16/2010 c6 13xi.writes
I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews!
Your narrative style is superb. The Ariadne you've crafted has a darkness and complexity to her that is both remarkably compelling and realistic, because it would be foolish to think that something like sharing dreams wouldn't leave scars.
"...and she would tell them about decaying cities. Towering skyscrapers that fell apart with the tide, as if sandcastles; about a sky that ripped itself in two so that they could bring a man back to life. About falling through all that, and how this will never compare. This is no achievement."
Brilliant use of language. I'm envious!
I look forward to reading more!
13xi.writesI can't believe this doesn't have more reviews!
Your narrative style is superb. The Ariadne you've crafted has a darkness and complexity to her that is both remarkably compelling and realistic, because it would be foolish to think that something like sharing dreams wouldn't leave scars.
"...and she would tell them about decaying cities. Towering skyscrapers that fell apart with the tide, as if sandcastles; about a sky that ripped itself in two so that they could bring a man back to life. About falling through all that, and how this will never compare. This is no achievement."
Brilliant use of language. I'm envious!
I look forward to reading more!
8/16/2010 c3 midst
amazing writing, i love how you have constructed the detail and narrative of ariadne, absolutely brilliant! i look forward to reading more of these chapters!
amazing writing, i love how you have constructed the detail and narrative of ariadne, absolutely brilliant! i look forward to reading more of these chapters!
8/10/2010 c4 24SkItZoFrEaK
An excellent wrap-up. Kept your theme going (particularly loved the last line, by the by), and also brought Ariadne to a workable solution to her dilemma. If she did have any major vice/flaw in the movie, it was her tendency to hesitate, to doubt herself. Or so I thought, anyway. Anyway, I really liked this short story. Here's to hoping you've got more!
24SkItZoFrEaKAn excellent wrap-up. Kept your theme going (particularly loved the last line, by the by), and also brought Ariadne to a workable solution to her dilemma. If she did have any major vice/flaw in the movie, it was her tendency to hesitate, to doubt herself. Or so I thought, anyway. Anyway, I really liked this short story. Here's to hoping you've got more!
8/10/2010 c2 SkItZoFrEaK
I'm something of an Ariadne/Arthur fan, so this chapter both made me smile and made me sad. The impulse to tell Arthur how she's feeling at war with her natural reservation compounded by her newfound fears is very believable and wonderful. Wonderfully done, anyway.
I'm something of an Ariadne/Arthur fan, so this chapter both made me smile and made me sad. The impulse to tell Arthur how she's feeling at war with her natural reservation compounded by her newfound fears is very believable and wonderful. Wonderfully done, anyway.
8/10/2010 c1 SkItZoFrEaK
This is well written and thought-provoking. I can see this being a problem with Ariadne after the Limbo thing - especially since it seems to be a pet theory with some audiences too. It also invokes the whole theme of 'what if your world wasn't real?'
Well-done (slightly chilling) concept, and good use of style/grammar/spelling and so on (always nice to see).
Good stuff!
This is well written and thought-provoking. I can see this being a problem with Ariadne after the Limbo thing - especially since it seems to be a pet theory with some audiences too. It also invokes the whole theme of 'what if your world wasn't real?'
Well-done (slightly chilling) concept, and good use of style/grammar/spelling and so on (always nice to see).
Good stuff!
8/9/2010 c3 9lucy the divaqueen
this is really beautifully written, even if it is a bit vague. excellent.
9lucy the divaqueenthis is really beautifully written, even if it is a bit vague. excellent.
7/30/2010 c1 10swampophelia
I love your story. these last few moments in the movie is what has truly bugged me, and though i'm not in the "we're all in cobb's head" camp, this is a great attempt at it. i wish that i remembered the dialogue better too (so i had to watch the movie again last night... which means i'll be retconing some of my own stuff...but that is how it is). please keep up writing, and i hope that you are of the no-ship ariadne camp (based on this chapter she has enough issues of her own).
10swampopheliaI love your story. these last few moments in the movie is what has truly bugged me, and though i'm not in the "we're all in cobb's head" camp, this is a great attempt at it. i wish that i remembered the dialogue better too (so i had to watch the movie again last night... which means i'll be retconing some of my own stuff...but that is how it is). please keep up writing, and i hope that you are of the no-ship ariadne camp (based on this chapter she has enough issues of her own).
7/30/2010 c1 3klaine freakin' bows
i love it! I actually need moree : ) update soon its soo good, like amazing! you are a great author : D
3klaine freakin' bowsi love it! I actually need moree : ) update soon its soo good, like amazing! you are a great author : D