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6/24/2013 c1 XkouyoushiroyamaX
LOL I LOVE THIS 3333333333 AND I LOVE U XD
6/27/2012 c1 Uruha Hellion
Ok, great job! I love this very much, but the only problem I have with this is that you keep saying that Uruha has a pussy and your grammer. Uruha is not a girl! He is a guy! The only problem I have with your grammer is that the tenses of the words you use. You tend to use past tense when you don't need to. I advise that you get a beta to check over your story. If you do get one or need help finding one, PM me and I'll do my best to help you. The only way I could see that if your tenses are wrong if english is not your first lanuage.

Best Reguards, Musique Of Gackt
2/22/2011 c1 79EverTheDreamer
Anything Goes is a musical by Cole Porter. This is not an Anything Goes fanfic.

Please move it. If it is an original work with original characters, I suggest fictionpress.com
11/20/2010 c1 kikyL
o_O wow, it's awesome. i love it :). but who's the person who spend the night with Kai? *curious*

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