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8/17/2010 c5 cAnDy-X-gYaL
Ooooohhhhhh Cliff-Hanger LOL. Loved this so much! It might even be better than the real Awakened! LOVE THE STEP-LOSER FIGHT =D! You are brilliant lol cannot wait for your next chapter! =] xx
Ooooohhhhhh Cliff-Hanger LOL. Loved this so much! It might even be better than the real Awakened! LOVE THE STEP-LOSER FIGHT =D! You are brilliant lol cannot wait for your next chapter! =] xx
8/14/2010 c5 marrish
I NEED MORE! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLPLZ PZL ZPLZPL ZPLZ PLZPLZPLZPLZPZLPZLPZLZPZLPLZ WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! :) :) :) :) :) :) PLEASE! 3
I NEED MORE! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLPLZ PZL ZPLZPL ZPLZ PLZPLZPLZPLZPZLPZLPZLZPZLPLZ WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! :) :) :) :) :) :) PLEASE! 3
8/14/2010 c5 LitLover2013
That was great. Can't wait for the next one! :)
That was great. Can't wait for the next one! :)
8/13/2010 c5 NutMegSmileyMe
Awesome chapter, such a tease! Please update quickly as I rather read your stories than work. :)
Awesome chapter, such a tease! Please update quickly as I rather read your stories than work. :)
8/13/2010 c5 
7Asian95
i gotta say, this is one of the best 'Awakened' versions I've read so far. Keep up the good work and I hope you finish it.
7Asian95i gotta say, this is one of the best 'Awakened' versions I've read so far. Keep up the good work and I hope you finish it.
8/12/2010 c5 1AlisonTexas
nice job, i liked it.
this amde my day- today and yesterday have been utter hell at school, so it was nice to come on here and see at least one story was updated. =)
1AlisonTexasnice job, i liked it.
this amde my day- today and yesterday have been utter hell at school, so it was nice to come on here and see at least one story was updated. =)
8/6/2010 c4 1forever stuck in a dream
wow this is good, i love how you update so often, i mean really this story is amazing. please keep writing no matter what!
1forever stuck in a dreamwow this is good, i love how you update so often, i mean really this story is amazing. please keep writing no matter what!
8/6/2010 c4 NutMegSmileyMe
Thank you for the quick update. So far, I love your story and I don't mind the Raphiem & Stevie Rae sections. I think its cool that the story is well rounded but I also understand that you're not writing this just for me. So create the story you wish, just please don't stop & update frequently. Thank you :)
Thank you for the quick update. So far, I love your story and I don't mind the Raphiem & Stevie Rae sections. I think its cool that the story is well rounded but I also understand that you're not writing this just for me. So create the story you wish, just please don't stop & update frequently. Thank you :)
8/5/2010 c4 4Midnight KAT04
Awww...u shudda made the part bout stevie rae and kalona longer...lol!
oh, and when rephaim asked stevie rae if he could giv her a hug she shudda sed sumthin like "no,cuz i'm gonna giv u 1"...or sumthing like that...just a random thot i had :] yeah...
~~~CF
4Midnight KAT04Awww...u shudda made the part bout stevie rae and kalona longer...lol!
oh, and when rephaim asked stevie rae if he could giv her a hug she shudda sed sumthin like "no,cuz i'm gonna giv u 1"...or sumthing like that...just a random thot i had :] yeah...
~~~CF