for Awakened8/5/2010 c4 
14vampluver19
i cant believe kalona gets off with no charges! still liked the chapter thou it was very interesting
14vampluver19i cant believe kalona gets off with no charges! still liked the chapter thou it was very interesting
8/5/2010 c4 xbrowneyedvampirex
kalona was such a jerk at the council meeting. :( haha but update~~~! really good story :D
kalona was such a jerk at the council meeting. :( haha but update~~~! really good story :D
8/5/2010 c3 Girl with Angel Blood
I love it! I think that you should definitely keep Stevie Rae's POV in it too. If you are going to include a third POV in the story I think it should be Kalona; Only if you want to include him in the story at all, as a half good half bad kind of character. Oh! And have you maybe thought of bringing back Heath into the story? You know, as a surprise twist? I think it could be interesting, and make Aphrodite's vision still possible, which could make Zoey and Aphrodite both a little nervous and unsure of what the future still has in store for them. Just an idea though. Also, you might want to be a little more careful on how you insert Zoey's made up curses. Like using poopie a little too much; tone it down just a tiny bit. Zoey has kind of a really sweet/innocent mannerisms. Over all your story is very interesting and I can't wait till the next chapter. I am especially curious as to what happened to Rephaim and what will happen with the Vampire High Counsel.
I love it! I think that you should definitely keep Stevie Rae's POV in it too. If you are going to include a third POV in the story I think it should be Kalona; Only if you want to include him in the story at all, as a half good half bad kind of character. Oh! And have you maybe thought of bringing back Heath into the story? You know, as a surprise twist? I think it could be interesting, and make Aphrodite's vision still possible, which could make Zoey and Aphrodite both a little nervous and unsure of what the future still has in store for them. Just an idea though. Also, you might want to be a little more careful on how you insert Zoey's made up curses. Like using poopie a little too much; tone it down just a tiny bit. Zoey has kind of a really sweet/innocent mannerisms. Over all your story is very interesting and I can't wait till the next chapter. I am especially curious as to what happened to Rephaim and what will happen with the Vampire High Counsel.
8/4/2010 c3 1AlisonTexas
ohhhhh! Aphrodites, and Rephaims PoV`s please! that would be so cool! and YES keep Srevie Raes PoV too, it wouldnt be as good without it =)
good story keep writing!XD
1AlisonTexasohhhhh! Aphrodites, and Rephaims PoV`s please! that would be so cool! and YES keep Srevie Raes PoV too, it wouldnt be as good without it =)
good story keep writing!XD
8/4/2010 c3 NutMegSmileyMe
OMG! So far...AWESOME! I came accross your story today & devoured it in a heartbeat. Please continue & don't get discouraged because you are doing a great job!
OMG! So far...AWESOME! I came accross your story today & devoured it in a heartbeat. Please continue & don't get discouraged because you are doing a great job!
8/4/2010 c3 14vampluver19
Good chapter! And I'd really like it if u cud do some from starks pov in future chapters. Btw luv the added stark tattoos
14vampluver19Good chapter! And I'd really like it if u cud do some from starks pov in future chapters. Btw luv the added stark tattoos
8/4/2010 c3 Anonymous
This is a cool story, keep it going. i like Zoey's POV the best but i think you should still do Stevie-rae's a little but not to much coz it can get boring.
This is a cool story, keep it going. i like Zoey's POV the best but i think you should still do Stevie-rae's a little but not to much coz it can get boring.
8/3/2010 c1 songbirdd83
I really enjoyed it! I'm new to this website, so I don't have any stories posted yet but when I do will you please read and review them?
I really enjoyed it! I'm new to this website, so I don't have any stories posted yet but when I do will you please read and review them?
8/3/2010 c2 14vampluver19
Another good chappie! I luved the stark and zoey stuff and ur even making it so I don't hate stevie rae! Lol update soon and sry for the late review
14vampluver19Another good chappie! I luved the stark and zoey stuff and ur even making it so I don't hate stevie rae! Lol update soon and sry for the late review
8/3/2010 c2 RITA
I LOVE! PLEASE TO BE CONTINUED!
I LOVE! PLEASE TO BE CONTINUED!
8/2/2010 c2 1AlisonTexas
AWAKENED! this is really cool! i think Rephaim is a good guy and that he will defenatly go ALL good and turn away from his dad. Cant wait to see what your going to do next!
1AlisonTexasAWAKENED! this is really cool! i think Rephaim is a good guy and that he will defenatly go ALL good and turn away from his dad. Cant wait to see what your going to do next!
8/2/2010 c2 stephanie
i love it
specially the last part
it was so cute
i love it
specially the last part
it was so cute
8/2/2010 c2 kalyh
I want to tell you that you're a really good writter. It's the first fic which respect totally the book except that Zoey never curse.I'm eager to read the next chapter and I hope that you'll update soon.
XO XO
PS: Sorry for my words, I'm frensh and it's a little hard to write and explain correctly what I want to tell ^^'
I want to tell you that you're a really good writter. It's the first fic which respect totally the book except that Zoey never curse.I'm eager to read the next chapter and I hope that you'll update soon.
XO XO
PS: Sorry for my words, I'm frensh and it's a little hard to write and explain correctly what I want to tell ^^'
7/31/2010 c1 14vampluver19
ur a very good writer and im very excited to read more of ur story. pleaz update soon
14vampluver19ur a very good writer and im very excited to read more of ur story. pleaz update soon