10/30/2021 c1 Th
This is petty.
This is petty.
7/2/2017 c1 Guest
I'd love a second one
I'd love a second one
8/30/2016 c1 idk
Austin must be retarded to break up with someone like you. Nice story :)
Austin must be retarded to break up with someone like you. Nice story :)
10/25/2015 c1 Guest
You should of killed the jakolpoe , brutally
You should of killed the jakolpoe , brutally
1/20/2014 c1 Anonymous
For some reason I think the whole ordeal should have happened during a hailstorm, just to elaborate on the jackalope-ness.
All-in-all, I think this is a pretty good story. I just though I'd mention that that little detail would add to the Jackalope-ness. Since Austin seemed horny as a jackalope in a hailstorm.
For some reason I think the whole ordeal should have happened during a hailstorm, just to elaborate on the jackalope-ness.
All-in-all, I think this is a pretty good story. I just though I'd mention that that little detail would add to the Jackalope-ness. Since Austin seemed horny as a jackalope in a hailstorm.
12/29/2013 c1 Huntress
Great insight on the hunt and Artemis. But sorry about your ex. ):
Great insight on the hunt and Artemis. But sorry about your ex. ):
8/11/2012 c1 Guest
I don't really understand what happened at the end? So did she like turn him back? Either way, I enjoyed reading it!
I don't really understand what happened at the end? So did she like turn him back? Either way, I enjoyed reading it!
5/27/2012 c1 Shadow Huntress
I liked this story, I also like the moral. Hey, since you wrote this, do you think that you could also write about the time that the hunters went to camp half-blood, the time before the came in Apollo's sun car? Maybe? I'd like that and I DID review. Keep writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing. One thing though, if your ex-boyfriend, Austin Young, actually hit on twelve-year old girls, the majority of which don't have fully developed bodies and couldn't even cope with being pregnant, I really don't think that that's the kind of boy that you want to be hanging out with.
Shadow Huntress
I liked this story, I also like the moral. Hey, since you wrote this, do you think that you could also write about the time that the hunters went to camp half-blood, the time before the came in Apollo's sun car? Maybe? I'd like that and I DID review. Keep writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing. One thing though, if your ex-boyfriend, Austin Young, actually hit on twelve-year old girls, the majority of which don't have fully developed bodies and couldn't even cope with being pregnant, I really don't think that that's the kind of boy that you want to be hanging out with.
Shadow Huntress
4/5/2012 c1 5Azn-Wemo
Haha! That made me laugh when Austin called Artemis a lesbian and finally! I have found your story . . . Been searching for it for YEARS!
Haha! That made me laugh when Austin called Artemis a lesbian and finally! I have found your story . . . Been searching for it for YEARS!
6/1/2011 c1 1How-Do-I-Escape-this-Labyrinth
Well, this was pretty good. It was pretty well written, but was also felt kind of empty to me, like they didn't have any feelings. Artemis was a bit out of character, just a bit mind you, but just enough that it didn't feel like it was her doing it, it felt like she was acting. You're spelling and grammar, from what I could tell, were good though. All in all, it was good, but with a few revisions, could be amazing.
Well, this was pretty good. It was pretty well written, but was also felt kind of empty to me, like they didn't have any feelings. Artemis was a bit out of character, just a bit mind you, but just enough that it didn't feel like it was her doing it, it felt like she was acting. You're spelling and grammar, from what I could tell, were good though. All in all, it was good, but with a few revisions, could be amazing.