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8/13/2010 c1 Ice Winifred
so far, I'm liking what I'm reading. I like how you started the story and i think the flow was great. Can't wait for more.
8/3/2010 c1 10slightlyobsessedHaylz
I liked it. You gave a very detailed view of the setting and the characters and the plot line has admittedly, got me hooked... so, yes I do want to see more - I will be putting this on alert :) For your first fanfiction, this is very good. You have the formatting and sentance structure nailed (some people are really fussy about that - take it from someone who has gotten flamed in the past for having horrible formatting!) I like how you have depicted Ariella (Ari) and I can't wait to see where the character goes from here... haha thinking back to my first fanfiction (a failure right from the word go, lets just say I am not an angst bunny) you have exeeded me!

Can't wait to see what you come up with next,


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