
12/6/2012 c1
2A Wandering Shadow
That is hilarious! Drew knows how to start up!
Alien...I just love May

That is hilarious! Drew knows how to start up!
Alien...I just love May
10/1/2012 c1
14Brianna Summers
Oh my gosh! I was laughing all the way through! This was so funny! Aliens! Salad head's an alien! Hahahaha...
Speaking of temporary bouts of insanity...
Anyway, great job :D

Oh my gosh! I was laughing all the way through! This was so funny! Aliens! Salad head's an alien! Hahahaha...
Speaking of temporary bouts of insanity...
Anyway, great job :D
3/17/2012 c1
22Shadowed Horizon
HAHAHA I love May. What a revelation, too. Definitely a fun read.
-S.H.

HAHAHA I love May. What a revelation, too. Definitely a fun read.
-S.H.
11/27/2010 c1 Guest
Cute 3
Cute 3
9/6/2010 c1
4Lammie
Hello there! :)
I really enjoyed your story. It was fun to read, really cute and in-character. :D
Another good thing was that you didn't overuse the italic and the bold type.
I'm looking forward to more contestshipping fics from you. :)

Hello there! :)
I really enjoyed your story. It was fun to read, really cute and in-character. :D
Another good thing was that you didn't overuse the italic and the bold type.
I'm looking forward to more contestshipping fics from you. :)
8/6/2010 c1
54Neopuff
That was positively adorable! And so much fun to read 3 Thank you for remembering that they're only ten so they shouldn't be making out or doing anything inappropriate yet _ Can't wait to see more from you c:

That was positively adorable! And so much fun to read 3 Thank you for remembering that they're only ten so they shouldn't be making out or doing anything inappropriate yet _ Can't wait to see more from you c:
8/4/2010 c1 sweet bloody roses17
I new at this but i have to say this is a really funny story. i love it.:)
I new at this but i have to say this is a really funny story. i love it.:)
8/3/2010 c1
63tempus terere
This is certainly not perfect and a few errors are there, too, but at large this is one very sweet and enjoyable piece of writing. I especially liked that you actually kept them in character. So go and write moar.
Because I'm subtle like that.

This is certainly not perfect and a few errors are there, too, but at large this is one very sweet and enjoyable piece of writing. I especially liked that you actually kept them in character. So go and write moar.
Because I'm subtle like that.
8/3/2010 c1 Abii
Aww. That was really cute. I especially enjoyed the part, "For a moment, Drew wondered if he had finally driven the girl off of the deep end. Alas, she had once been such a nice, sane girl, too.
Oh, well. If she was already insane anyway, what harm could more teasing do?"
It was too funny xD and in character! Soo good job :]
Keep writing,
Abii(:
Aww. That was really cute. I especially enjoyed the part, "For a moment, Drew wondered if he had finally driven the girl off of the deep end. Alas, she had once been such a nice, sane girl, too.
Oh, well. If she was already insane anyway, what harm could more teasing do?"
It was too funny xD and in character! Soo good job :]
Keep writing,
Abii(:
8/2/2010 c1 Ronmione x3
So, I pretty much died of cuteness when he kissed her cheek at the end. EEK. x3 The witty, back-and-forth banter, the awesomeness of May's thought process... SO ADORABLE. PLEASE write more Contestshipping? =-)
So, I pretty much died of cuteness when he kissed her cheek at the end. EEK. x3 The witty, back-and-forth banter, the awesomeness of May's thought process... SO ADORABLE. PLEASE write more Contestshipping? =-)
8/2/2010 c1
3Kahtita
That was soooooo cute! Loved it! They are kids, and you wrote the story the way it could have happened in the animé. =))

That was soooooo cute! Loved it! They are kids, and you wrote the story the way it could have happened in the animé. =))
8/2/2010 c1
1clocks.TICKTOCK
I really enjoyed reading this! It was so cute, and the ending made me laugh.

I really enjoyed reading this! It was so cute, and the ending made me laugh.