for Naruto Lawliet: A Shinigami's Heir12/29/2015 c2 Narue-Nara-chan
Merry Christmas!
Anyways, I think that, if you rewrite them, then you should take them down, but if you don't plan to do that, then leave them "for posterity sake"
Merry Christmas!
Anyways, I think that, if you rewrite them, then you should take them down, but if you don't plan to do that, then leave them "for posterity sake"
6/27/2013 c1 
2iamgoku
WOW loved the first chapter nice idea of having L raise naruto , I haven't seen anything like that before in a death note / naruto fic
Your a really good writer by the way you portrayed the characters really well
I hope you update please I'd love to see this fic continued
2iamgokuWOW loved the first chapter nice idea of having L raise naruto , I haven't seen anything like that before in a death note / naruto fic
Your a really good writer by the way you portrayed the characters really well
I hope you update please I'd love to see this fic continued
9/22/2012 c1 8Dark Naruto
this seems interesting! a parent L and kid naruto.. i'm gonna head off to reading the Naruto's ABC's and L's! :D
8Dark Narutothis seems interesting! a parent L and kid naruto.. i'm gonna head off to reading the Naruto's ABC's and L's! :D
9/1/2012 c1 guest
I want to see how Naruto grows up when being raised by someone like L. I wonder if when he gets older, if he'll figer out that L isn't from his world! Please update soon!
I want to see how Naruto grows up when being raised by someone like L. I wonder if when he gets older, if he'll figer out that L isn't from his world! Please update soon!
7/12/2011 c1 BeautifullySleepDeprived
This..this is awesome. They way you intertwined these two different stories is absolutely perfect and original!
I love it!
Can't wait for chapter two!
This..this is awesome. They way you intertwined these two different stories is absolutely perfect and original!
I love it!
Can't wait for chapter two!
6/6/2011 c1 Narue-Nara-chan
interesting. First Death Note/Naruto crossover I've read. I want to read more. Please continue^^
Thanks for the fic!
interesting. First Death Note/Naruto crossover I've read. I want to read more. Please continue^^
Thanks for the fic!
3/28/2011 c1 ano nymus
Amazing it makes you wonder if naruto will grow up like him. Thats it, its over good bye.
Amazing it makes you wonder if naruto will grow up like him. Thats it, its over good bye.
12/7/2010 c1 24Yeziel Moore
An interesting idea. I like it.
I'll be waiting for an update and next time i'll write a decent review, not this crappy thing. I'm just too lazy, but i wanted to convey my... eh, liking? (that sounds ghastly phrased)
'till next time
Yeziel M.
24Yeziel MooreAn interesting idea. I like it.
I'll be waiting for an update and next time i'll write a decent review, not this crappy thing. I'm just too lazy, but i wanted to convey my... eh, liking? (that sounds ghastly phrased)
'till next time
Yeziel M.
10/29/2010 c1 1ReaperLuci
I can't wait to see how naruto grows up with L as his father. And Light is back as well. *smirks* well, i can tell this is going to be a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
1ReaperLuciI can't wait to see how naruto grows up with L as his father. And Light is back as well. *smirks* well, i can tell this is going to be a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/9/2010 c1 1414thEternityNightMare
This is really good. Nice details. Most authors dont bother with them, but I'm happy to see that you have. The basic story line is good and I've really enjoyed reading this first chapter. :D Keep up the good work! 3
1414thEternityNightMareThis is really good. Nice details. Most authors dont bother with them, but I'm happy to see that you have. The basic story line is good and I've really enjoyed reading this first chapter. :D Keep up the good work! 3