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Cadê a continuação?
Cadê a continuação?
6/30/2011 c1 
12Senna54367
Ahem. Nice chapter. try to make chapters longer. When you type, it may seem long, but it's not that long. Read my stories and try figure out how I made the chapters longer. Type what ever's in your head until your head explodes! *kidding*
12Senna54367Ahem. Nice chapter. try to make chapters longer. When you type, it may seem long, but it's not that long. Read my stories and try figure out how I made the chapters longer. Type what ever's in your head until your head explodes! *kidding*
10/13/2010 c1 Elcarim-Soberian-1222
curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back. hehe i dont know of a dragon though.
curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back. hehe i dont know of a dragon though.
8/8/2010 c1 karee-chan
That was awesome! The ending was wonderful. Curiosity may actually kill the dragon... (with millions of pink cherry blossoms! aka - Byakuya Kuchiki, the protective brother!) XD
That was awesome! The ending was wonderful. Curiosity may actually kill the dragon... (with millions of pink cherry blossoms! aka - Byakuya Kuchiki, the protective brother!) XD
8/6/2010 c1 Farrah.Rainne
I have noooo idea what the whole story is about , considering i have never seen the show , but i LOVE IT anyway ! : ) You're great , llama toe . hahah ,
I have noooo idea what the whole story is about , considering i have never seen the show , but i LOVE IT anyway ! : ) You're great , llama toe . hahah ,
8/3/2010 c1 Charming Nature
Hey! It was a good beginin for your first Fanfiction!
Just one tiny note: the rukia's second name is Kuchiki not kukichi. Just that! Good luck with your next Chapter!
Update soon please!
Hey! It was a good beginin for your first Fanfiction!
Just one tiny note: the rukia's second name is Kuchiki not kukichi. Just that! Good luck with your next Chapter!
Update soon please!
8/2/2010 c1 1Momo9096
good start for a first fanfic. keep updating this could be a very interesting story and good luck with the story too:D
1Momo9096good start for a first fanfic. keep updating this could be a very interesting story and good luck with the story too:D
8/2/2010 c1 26SparklyColours
That was good! Good job for your first fanfiction! And your a fan of HitsuRuki, I'm assuming? HitsuRuki is the best!
Please don't think I'm rude! You spelled Kuchiki wrong and try and make the chapters longer. That's all!
If you need help, you can ask me in a message.
-StarPrincess
P.S. update soon!
26SparklyColoursThat was good! Good job for your first fanfiction! And your a fan of HitsuRuki, I'm assuming? HitsuRuki is the best!
Please don't think I'm rude! You spelled Kuchiki wrong and try and make the chapters longer. That's all!
If you need help, you can ask me in a message.
-StarPrincess
P.S. update soon!