for Unexpected9/21/2020 c1 
1Azrael Jinsei
more? please? this was too short.
thank you so much for sharing this with us
1Azrael Jinseimore? please? this was too short.
thank you so much for sharing this with us
8/23/2017 c1 Guest
Yooo this was really cute! I saw this short because I was reading the reviews for one of kittenshift17's stories (I think it was howl for me?) and I clicked on your name and yeah
Yooo this was really cute! I saw this short because I was reading the reviews for one of kittenshift17's stories (I think it was howl for me?) and I clicked on your name and yeah
7/7/2016 c1 5xxZutaraFanxx
This was awesome! I love this and im usually no a fan of modern AU's but this was great! I would love for you to add a wedding scene or a ten years later scene with the couple reflecting on how they met. Either way, great story and fabulous writing. Thanks for sharing.
5xxZutaraFanxxThis was awesome! I love this and im usually no a fan of modern AU's but this was great! I would love for you to add a wedding scene or a ten years later scene with the couple reflecting on how they met. Either way, great story and fabulous writing. Thanks for sharing.
8/12/2015 c1 zuko
dear zuko ilove you fromleah brooks
dear zuko ilove you fromleah brooks
2/7/2014 c1 Rose Thorns
that was hilarious!
that was hilarious!
6/19/2012 c1 1greenlantern123
I'm usually not an AU fan but this is literally the only exception for me. It was extremely well-written and although encounter between zuko and katara was totally random, the way their relationship developed, in a matter of 10 minutes, was completely natural. You're an amazing writer. You should continue this!
1greenlantern123I'm usually not an AU fan but this is literally the only exception for me. It was extremely well-written and although encounter between zuko and katara was totally random, the way their relationship developed, in a matter of 10 minutes, was completely natural. You're an amazing writer. You should continue this!
8/2/2011 c1 TheShortie
Wow. This oneshot/story is really really good. But I must say, I wish you could make this into a story. Add more chapters?
Wow. This oneshot/story is really really good. But I must say, I wish you could make this into a story. Add more chapters?
12/24/2010 c1 1Azrael Jinsei
This is really good, I think you should expand it, at the end I felt like there should be another chapter following it. Thank you for writing it.
1Azrael JinseiThis is really good, I think you should expand it, at the end I felt like there should be another chapter following it. Thank you for writing it.
10/22/2010 c1 2rezmutt
lol oh my gosh i love iroh. this fic is so refreshingly sincere and just amazing 3 it
2rezmuttlol oh my gosh i love iroh. this fic is so refreshingly sincere and just amazing 3 it
8/21/2010 c1 3Gaaras1Girl
The list of all things that need to be corrected in this fic:
“my first OnceShot” I believe you mean one-shot.
“spit fiery no-nonsense attitude” I believe you mean “spit fire”.
“And as far as the sex thingwent, well,” These words were pushed together.
"We need to get you a shirt beforewe go” These words were pushed together.
Other then that there is not a single thing wrong with this fic. In fact I loved it! Though I’ve never read anything from this fandom I know a good piece of writing when I see it, and not only that but the characters were so well written (and in character) that the more I read the more I remembered of the Avatar series! Quite impressive considering this was written in AU. (Which I’m starting to see as your specialty)
No complaints for me story wise; it was a very funny and believable plot line. The length of the fic itself was very satisfying; after reading it I didn’t feel that there were any lose ends, or that you left any expectations unmet.
I just adored all the humor here and the part where his uncle was watching him the whole time was just priceless! Not to mention how perfect it was that she pulled away from Zuko when he tried to kiss her again, and the line she told him at the end of their section was very funny! Job well done!
-GG from Critics United
3Gaaras1GirlThe list of all things that need to be corrected in this fic:
“my first OnceShot” I believe you mean one-shot.
“spit fiery no-nonsense attitude” I believe you mean “spit fire”.
“And as far as the sex thingwent, well,” These words were pushed together.
"We need to get you a shirt beforewe go” These words were pushed together.
Other then that there is not a single thing wrong with this fic. In fact I loved it! Though I’ve never read anything from this fandom I know a good piece of writing when I see it, and not only that but the characters were so well written (and in character) that the more I read the more I remembered of the Avatar series! Quite impressive considering this was written in AU. (Which I’m starting to see as your specialty)
No complaints for me story wise; it was a very funny and believable plot line. The length of the fic itself was very satisfying; after reading it I didn’t feel that there were any lose ends, or that you left any expectations unmet.
I just adored all the humor here and the part where his uncle was watching him the whole time was just priceless! Not to mention how perfect it was that she pulled away from Zuko when he tried to kiss her again, and the line she told him at the end of their section was very funny! Job well done!
-GG from Critics United
8/19/2010 c1 1xBrown-Eyed-Maidenx
One of the best AU's I've ever read! Hahahas, I nearly died of laughter near the ending when Iroh was musing about Zuko and Katara. XD It seems like an Iroh thing to do. XDDD
Awww, I loved the interaction between Zuko and Katara. It was soo cute and funny. XD
Great job on this one-shot! I hope you'll continue writing more Zutara! :33
1xBrown-Eyed-MaidenxOne of the best AU's I've ever read! Hahahas, I nearly died of laughter near the ending when Iroh was musing about Zuko and Katara. XD It seems like an Iroh thing to do. XDDD
Awww, I loved the interaction between Zuko and Katara. It was soo cute and funny. XD
Great job on this one-shot! I hope you'll continue writing more Zutara! :33
8/3/2010 c1 meg
you should continue the story you have a great polt line
you should continue the story you have a great polt line