for Looking for Beauty7/31/2015 c1 Guest
I like it, but the long paragraphs in the beginning were hard to read... (I need glasses.) But Wonderful descriptions and story!
I like it, but the long paragraphs in the beginning were hard to read... (I need glasses.) But Wonderful descriptions and story!
2/24/2013 c1 
1mtnikolle
That's some really beautiful writing... and the choice of narrator for most of it really surprised me. Interesting twist.
1mtnikolleThat's some really beautiful writing... and the choice of narrator for most of it really surprised me. Interesting twist.
8/2/2012 c1 22Lady Rosalune
That was sweet. I liked the speech and the descriptive writing style. Since I've always been a HikaHaru fan I don't really have any complaints save one: Kyouko, really? Was that necessary? Couldn't you have come up with a less. . . disturbing way of getting Tamaki and Kyoya off of Haruhi's back? Only complaint. :-) Thanks for writing this!
22Lady RosaluneThat was sweet. I liked the speech and the descriptive writing style. Since I've always been a HikaHaru fan I don't really have any complaints save one: Kyouko, really? Was that necessary? Couldn't you have come up with a less. . . disturbing way of getting Tamaki and Kyoya off of Haruhi's back? Only complaint. :-) Thanks for writing this!
8/2/2011 c1 3FrostyFeline
Yay TamaKyou and HikaHaru! My favs! This is a very sweet story! I love it! *screeching sound* wait a sec...is that GIRL Kyouya?
3FrostyFelineYay TamaKyou and HikaHaru! My favs! This is a very sweet story! I love it! *screeching sound* wait a sec...is that GIRL Kyouya?
2/21/2011 c1 3KanamexYuuki fan
Your writing style's amazing! I love the descriptions! Ganbatte (Do your best) for your future works! I look forward to them!
3KanamexYuuki fanYour writing style's amazing! I love the descriptions! Ganbatte (Do your best) for your future works! I look forward to them!
8/6/2010 c1 Child of the Snow
This was very cute. I like Haruhi/Hikaru very much ^_^
I hope you get enough views to draw Kyouko XD
This was very cute. I like Haruhi/Hikaru very much ^_^
I hope you get enough views to draw Kyouko XD
8/3/2010 c1 Hotaru Gunso
OMG this was SO cute! PLEASE do a sequel! And also, I'm not a yaoi fan AT ALL, but TamaKyo has always been one of my VERY few exceptions, but in this story, what "Kyouko" did for them to be together was just awesome! :D
OMG this was SO cute! PLEASE do a sequel! And also, I'm not a yaoi fan AT ALL, but TamaKyo has always been one of my VERY few exceptions, but in this story, what "Kyouko" did for them to be together was just awesome! :D
8/3/2010 c1 7Ayaka Mizushima
This is a great story, and I will read more of your others while I am on my holiday :D
I love the way you describe everything, and I can't wait to read your other stories now :]
7Ayaka MizushimaThis is a great story, and I will read more of your others while I am on my holiday :D
I love the way you describe everything, and I can't wait to read your other stories now :]
8/3/2010 c1 24have-a-cookie
AWWW! So cute!
Just...the whole...atmosphere of the story. It was beautiful :D
I love your style. :) and I love Hika/Haru so that's a bonus.
But...at the end when you had Kyouya...ahem, Kyouko, finishing up her speech, in my head there was this girl's voice. And I was like...hmmm...did she write a story with an OC that ends up with Tama-chan? And I keep reading and WOAH! WOAH! WOAH!...it was Kyouya XD LOL. That was great.
Anyways - everyone was marvelously in character and...it was just CUTE!
I hope you get 50 billion reviews for this ^^
24have-a-cookieAWWW! So cute!
Just...the whole...atmosphere of the story. It was beautiful :D
I love your style. :) and I love Hika/Haru so that's a bonus.
But...at the end when you had Kyouya...ahem, Kyouko, finishing up her speech, in my head there was this girl's voice. And I was like...hmmm...did she write a story with an OC that ends up with Tama-chan? And I keep reading and WOAH! WOAH! WOAH!...it was Kyouya XD LOL. That was great.
Anyways - everyone was marvelously in character and...it was just CUTE!
I hope you get 50 billion reviews for this ^^