for Towards the Light8/30/2010 c4 
14ll Kairi ll
So Naruto's been missing for half a year, and in that year, he was basically tortured? And if he was, he lost his memories of everything?
PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! write more!
14ll Kairi llSo Naruto's been missing for half a year, and in that year, he was basically tortured? And if he was, he lost his memories of everything?
PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! write more!
8/30/2010 c3 ll Kairi ll
Awww! I was hoping for a battle and answers from the two strangers! Grrrr. how dare they do and say that kind of stuff bout my Naruto!
Awww! I was hoping for a battle and answers from the two strangers! Grrrr. how dare they do and say that kind of stuff bout my Naruto!
8/30/2010 c4 Ennalight
Wow you really know how the human mind thinks. Please keep up the story it's really worth reading.
Wow you really know how the human mind thinks. Please keep up the story it's really worth reading.
8/30/2010 c3 SuzyQ
Kiss my a** jc! DP would have twice as many reviews by now if she had done this as Naru/Hina and you know it you stupid skank!
Kiss my a** jc! DP would have twice as many reviews by now if she had done this as Naru/Hina and you know it you stupid skank!
8/26/2010 c1 Ennalight
O wow please continue the story. It's one of the best angst story's I have read in some time.
O wow please continue the story. It's one of the best angst story's I have read in some time.
8/25/2010 c3 Tibblaye
the whole thing has been great it is really filled with emotions i like it a lot
the whole thing has been great it is really filled with emotions i like it a lot
8/24/2010 c3 Rise Against713
great chapter. this chapter raises a lot more questions. i'm loving the mystery behind it all. I'm liking your style so far and the story is starting off very realistic.
keep up the good work
great chapter. this chapter raises a lot more questions. i'm loving the mystery behind it all. I'm liking your style so far and the story is starting off very realistic.
keep up the good work
8/23/2010 c3 iamtehg
I believe you have the makings of a good story here. The flow and wording of the story is well done and there's alot of things to grasp onto and keep the reader coming back for more. I'm definitely interested in seeing where you might go with this so keep it up.
I believe you have the makings of a good story here. The flow and wording of the story is well done and there's alot of things to grasp onto and keep the reader coming back for more. I'm definitely interested in seeing where you might go with this so keep it up.
8/23/2010 c3 Kiratt
This was a highly interesting beginning...I really want to see what happens with Team 7 and with all of Naruto's old friends...I'm a little confused regarding the time frame of Naruto's disappearance, but as the story goes on, I feel like that's one of those things you grasp rather than are told...but all the same. I'm also super curious about what happened with him in the past year...I like the way you've framed the first chapter, what with Naruto's thoughts and actions. It really set up for the second chapter. My thing would be I kinda wish the chapters were longer...but if the chapters are short but the updates are often, it's all good. :D All in all, please update soon!
~*Kira*~
This was a highly interesting beginning...I really want to see what happens with Team 7 and with all of Naruto's old friends...I'm a little confused regarding the time frame of Naruto's disappearance, but as the story goes on, I feel like that's one of those things you grasp rather than are told...but all the same. I'm also super curious about what happened with him in the past year...I like the way you've framed the first chapter, what with Naruto's thoughts and actions. It really set up for the second chapter. My thing would be I kinda wish the chapters were longer...but if the chapters are short but the updates are often, it's all good. :D All in all, please update soon!
~*Kira*~
8/23/2010 c3 Collussess
Great job on the new chapter and can't wait for the next chap as always. Keep up with the good work.
Great job on the new chapter and can't wait for the next chap as always. Keep up with the good work.