for Towards the Light8/9/2010 c1 
6BigTimeNinjaXD
its definately got potential. plz continue it =) i will look forward to reading more of it! =)
6BigTimeNinjaXDits definately got potential. plz continue it =) i will look forward to reading more of it! =)
8/5/2010 c1 Jenna
I definetley think this is worth continueing. It has potential.
I definetley think this is worth continueing. It has potential.
8/5/2010 c1 AmazinglyTalented
Please do contine! This story seems like it has great potential. I really like rhe paring & other than that, Good luck! I really do hope that u continue ;)
Please do contine! This story seems like it has great potential. I really like rhe paring & other than that, Good luck! I really do hope that u continue ;)
8/5/2010 c1 3Darkide
Very well done. Great symbolism while not feeling overdone and cheesy. A lot of potential here; would love to see more. And your grammar was not that bad. No worse (and to be truthful better) than mine. (Ok, a ton better than mine lol)
3DarkideVery well done. Great symbolism while not feeling overdone and cheesy. A lot of potential here; would love to see more. And your grammar was not that bad. No worse (and to be truthful better) than mine. (Ok, a ton better than mine lol)
8/5/2010 c1 Anonymous 25
WRITE MORE PLEASE!
WRITE MORE PLEASE!
8/4/2010 c1 642814
Very interesting idea. Spelling and grammar is excellent considering you are writing in a language other than your first! Good job :D.
Very intriguing. You've left the reader guessing and curious as to what will happen next. That shows your skill and makes people want to keep reading :).
I think you should make this multi-chaptered, it doesn't read as a one-shot should xD.
Very interesting idea. Spelling and grammar is excellent considering you are writing in a language other than your first! Good job :D.
Very intriguing. You've left the reader guessing and curious as to what will happen next. That shows your skill and makes people want to keep reading :).
I think you should make this multi-chaptered, it doesn't read as a one-shot should xD.
8/4/2010 c1 jc
Omg, SuzyQ stfu. This is NaruSaku so get out of here. Anyways, great fic. As you can tell, i love NaruSaku, lol. Hopefully we get to see Sakura's pov.
Omg, SuzyQ stfu. This is NaruSaku so get out of here. Anyways, great fic. As you can tell, i love NaruSaku, lol. Hopefully we get to see Sakura's pov.
8/4/2010 c1 Guest
This is good but i think it should be in Sakura's POV.
This is good but i think it should be in Sakura's POV.
8/4/2010 c1 Dmanplayer723
Your lucky why that is normally I don't comment till the 5th chapter but this first chapter was really good I would like to see more then one chapter for this story and also congrats on your great start to your first story man, oh and keep the paring as it is :)
Your lucky why that is normally I don't comment till the 5th chapter but this first chapter was really good I would like to see more then one chapter for this story and also congrats on your great start to your first story man, oh and keep the paring as it is :)
8/4/2010 c1 6ManateeFace
Duh make it multi-chaptered! What happpens? you couldn't just end it on a cliff hanger! awesome story by the way :D
6ManateeFaceDuh make it multi-chaptered! What happpens? you couldn't just end it on a cliff hanger! awesome story by the way :D
8/4/2010 c1 Shadow Of The Night 01
got to admit it's interesting so far, so i'm looking foward for the next chapter.
got to admit it's interesting so far, so i'm looking foward for the next chapter.